The Second Dawn Files - Gordon Miller
Added 2023-03-30 07:54:45 +0000 UTCThank you to everyone who voted! Gordon Miller from NYC was our "lucky" winner.
As is usual, this became longer than expected. But I hope you enjoy Gordon's story of change. π
Comments
This is why you're the best in the game. The depth of character, the subtle change of voice as the character goes through the metamorphosis in both mind and body, the depth, the attention to detail. This isn't mere smut. This is art. And that is why.....as I said.....you're the best. Plus if I know anything about the Emory-verse he is definitely reading her diary hahaha.
Jessica Thence
2024-07-13 05:27:14 +0000 UTCThank you, Stacy!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-04-07 04:24:19 +0000 UTCThat was great :-) x
stacy C
2023-04-06 00:43:35 +0000 UTCHaha, interesting observation about the smilesβI didn't even notice that parallelism! But I like it! As for Gordon's new name, Jordan is as good a guess as any! To be honest, I think Jordan perfectly suits that ambiguous place between her masculine past and feminine present. Thanks, Bowie!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-04-05 03:18:24 +0000 UTCThank you, Pelican! Thank you for the thoughtful feedback, Pelican. You make some good points. You're right -- Gordon's transformation into such a pretty woman means his forced transition was at least somewhat easier, as she now has validation and praise for her new form. But that doesn't erase the deeper sense of loss over her former life. Even with admiration, she is still grappling with her forced transformation against her will. She's stuck in a life of luxury she never wanted. π¬ And yes, I imagine that she is his woman in every way.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-04-05 03:17:19 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Maggie. I had a feeling Gordon would land somewhere in the middle of being happy and miserable. She has adapted, but isn't necessarily happy that she was made to adapt.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-04-05 02:47:20 +0000 UTCI like them A LOT too, Digi. I don't want to overdo them, though...
Emory Ahlberg
2023-04-05 02:45:48 +0000 UTCI'm happy you liked it, Thomas! I really enjoyed Gordon's transformation. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-04-05 02:45:21 +0000 UTCAs for e-mail, I thought I gave you mine, didn't I? Sorry if I forgot. Not sure how to start over a new conversation.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2023-03-31 21:06:47 +0000 UTCYes, Gina is definitely following her calling. π Liam we have seen as part of the competition!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-03-31 17:32:43 +0000 UTCFor these images, it was a mix of Photoshop and face swap. And sure, feel free to send me a message or email! π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-03-31 17:31:38 +0000 UTCThat was a sweet one.
Thomas Tolliver
2023-03-31 10:36:49 +0000 UTCThis second dawn transformation are the Best
Digi2288
2023-03-31 00:30:16 +0000 UTCWOW... the story is not an usual TG caption story AGAIN........ β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈDeep stuff
MaggieHeels
2023-03-30 19:02:46 +0000 UTCπ (This thread made me bump that tweet thread from a few days ago lol)
Alyson Greaves
2023-03-30 16:04:20 +0000 UTCVader points to Gina: "NO feminizations." Gina: πΎ
Emory Ahlberg
2023-03-30 16:03:36 +0000 UTCDoes she get a jetpack tho
Alyson Greaves
2023-03-30 15:52:26 +0000 UTCπ I desperately want Gina to become the "Boba Fett" of the Xuniverse. Since she was born in New Jersey and lived in NYC, I figured she'd be perfect for Gordon. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-03-30 15:47:03 +0000 UTCMaybe the fact that Gordon turned into such a stunning beauty makes the transition a bit more manageable as I'm sure she's been admired and praised by many. Too bad there is still so much sadness in her, understandably so. I wonder how far was she transitioned and how far is her relationship with her owner. Is she his woman in every aspect?
Pelicanboss
2023-03-30 15:15:00 +0000 UTCA quick question, beloved muse. Did you do this in Daz3D or is just just Photoshop with some Stable Diffusion A.I thrown in for good measure? I'm just asking for Charity and Chastity, my characters. Also I wish you'd told me earlier that you, Ella Cherry, and presumably other supporters as well preferred a M.I.L.F character. I have just the idea in mind and hope you talk to you all via private message/e-mail.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2023-03-30 14:38:27 +0000 UTCYes we don't see enough of Gina, nor enough of Liam/Lia and Vincent. I'm trying to have sympathy and mercy for Gina, Alyson, but I can't. Unlike Holly who didn't have a choice, Gina actually did.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2023-03-30 14:22:12 +0000 UTCI really want the Second Dawn to fall, and especially its more monstrous members. Holly had no choice, but Gina did. But what I would like more, my darling muse, is to see more of Liam and Vincent, who were supposed to be taken alongside Jack/Jill.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2023-03-30 14:20:17 +0000 UTCIt seems Gordon has exactly the same smile on the first page and the last page. (Not sure what that means!) Also... I wonder what Gordan's new name is... Jordan perhap?
Bowie897
2023-03-30 13:49:12 +0000 UTCthe refined, appreciative, sensible parts of my brain: βThis was gorgeously written, sad and rather beautiful. A wonderful thing to read this morning.β the goblin who lives in my brainstem: βGINA LORE GINA LORE GINA LOREβ
Alyson Greaves
2023-03-30 08:25:22 +0000 UTC
