Second Draft: The End?
Added 2024-10-23 08:35:50 +0000 UTCSince I don't get too many comments, it's hard to gauge how much you guys are into the short story. So I added an "epilogue" option among the choices. Otherwise, it's a simple "do we keep focusing on Vaniar, or do we check on Elle?" kind of deal. Simple and straight to the point.
