Undercover, Part 3
Added 2022-07-17 23:26:44 +0000 UTCThe continuation of "Undercover" again turned out longer than I expected. Thank you to everyone who voted! I hope you like how it turned out.
I believe there will be at least one more part to Special Agent Peter Abaya's story. 😊
Comments
Wonder what you thought of the finale, Jess!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-06-27 03:49:33 +0000 UTCSure, keep on pretending you're doing a mission and it'll end one day sweetheart. It'll make you feel better. But I don't think anything is changing.
Jessica Thence
2023-06-21 13:53:06 +0000 UTCSeems you're right, Stacy!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-19 23:03:06 +0000 UTCI think he's too down that femme rabbit hole to escape now LoL x
stacy C
2022-08-02 11:02:44 +0000 UTCDifficult answer, power, wealth and luxury tempt everyone, and with the radical turn of his life who knows?
ckarya
2022-07-27 10:33:31 +0000 UTCQuite possibly! Do you think she'll be able to keep her morality intact?
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-27 05:30:56 +0000 UTCMaya will be the new "Teresa Mendoza - Queen of the South"? Great story!
ckarya
2022-07-25 17:53:55 +0000 UTCThanks, Maggie! I want to know more about this story, too. 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-22 21:25:19 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Ella! We'll see how long her story goes. I don't want to jump the shark. 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-22 21:09:29 +0000 UTCThank you, Allan! I've been thinking of doing something like this. I enjoy the "speed" of the storytelling I can do with prose + images and might extend that to a new comic...
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-21 22:54:23 +0000 UTC"Control" is relative, I suppose! Thank you, France!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-21 22:49:03 +0000 UTCThere are certainly organizations out there willing to pay top-dollar for them. 😁
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-20 06:04:25 +0000 UTCI wonder if illegal high powered hormones and hormone blockers are part of the drug trade?
Bowie897
2022-07-18 15:58:36 +0000 UTCI think that I would be pleased if you'll continue with this story as long you'll be able to find such fine photos of that beautiful model ;) In short... I want to know more about this story ❣️
MaggieHeels
2022-07-18 14:59:30 +0000 UTCThat’s a story I would gladly follow as long as you keep writing it, Emory! It’s fantastic!
Ella Cherry
2022-07-18 14:08:55 +0000 UTCWhy dont you make another comic with this story? I think it might be better than "half sister".
Allan Kim
2022-07-18 11:58:54 +0000 UTCA delicious meal and offered with such delicacy. Maya can take control but also lose it. Thanks EA.
France Day
2022-07-18 11:42:44 +0000 UTCThat's a great point, Pelican. Peter probably would've gotten a pat on the back, but they're certainly would've been a full investigation into how he could have prevented falling into Navarro's hands in the first place. They would likely find a way to blame him and maybe even fired him from the FBI. Peter is undoubtedly in a better position here to affect real change, although whether he falls deeper into this lifestyle remains to be seen. 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-18 07:33:42 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Rex! I had so much fun writing this part. I can't wait to finish Peter's story. 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2022-07-18 07:24:40 +0000 UTCOH MY GOSH Emory!!! What a great chapter. You amaze me with your story telling ability. 💖
Rex
2022-07-18 01:08:01 +0000 UTCWhat's even worst, had Peter decided to do his job and bring the Cartel down I'm pretty sure the FBI would care less about his sacrifice, and would have not compensated him for the irreversible changes in his live. I can understand, under those circumstances a person could be seduced into luxury even it it was illegal. Peter is now in a position to get his revenge and end up with all that wealth.
Pelicanboss
2022-07-18 01:06:52 +0000 UTC
