Jack & Jill - Phase 5, 200 - 211
Added 2019-11-24 22:59:33 +0000 UTCIn this edition, Jill's continues to spar with Davis.
Is Jill truly ready to submit to her changes, or is she practicing her new-found feminine wiles on him? If so, will it work? Or is Mr. Davis too smart (and too cruel) to fall for her manipulations?
Can't wait to hear what you think!
Comments
Hmmm. Interesting theory, Erica! π
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 08:00:46 +0000 UTCHe IS a total creep. But, I suppose you have to do what you have to do....
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:59:48 +0000 UTCCan you imagine? I think Emily will be in utter shock. Her big bro is now her big sis, and amazingly feminine.
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:59:18 +0000 UTCYes. Jack is certainly fading.... Or maybe he's already gone.
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:58:26 +0000 UTCShe's looking pretty sexy, I have to admit!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:58:06 +0000 UTCPerhaps! And the question becomes... What does Emily do with Joey then?
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:57:53 +0000 UTCHm! Maybe so, Tiki!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:56:59 +0000 UTCA master writer!? Thank you so much, Sky. You made me blush. π I'm not sure Jack & Jill should NEVER end, but don't worry I still have plenty of story to tell!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:56:36 +0000 UTCAh, this is very well put, France. You're right that Jill's greatest danger comes from becoming caught in her own web. I daresay this is at least partly what happened to Holly!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:55:43 +0000 UTCGreat insights, Chanmac! Jill is certainly conflicted on a great many things. Does "Jack" even really exist anymore? Notice how Davis is using his old name and calling her a "sissy" (implying she's male). I wonder how Jill feels about hearing those things!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-11-26 07:54:13 +0000 UTCShe's been showing signs of being taken by the new identity for a while.. and seems eager / curious for more. The momentum's building. But you're so good at not giving things away who knows.. Maybe she went in because she knows Xus existence protects her (as Davis alluded too) so she killed two birds with one stone protecting the other girl. Maybe she isn't trying to trick anyone and just wants to find who she is now... *dizzy Just cant tell lol. Maybe she knew Davis could teach her these things? I tend to think she is playing him in that way I mention Xu but at the same time the new her is taking her on a journey? Like maybe auto pilots or the eagerness to explore something shes been feeling explored. WHO KNOWS! I thought maybe she would play the game to save Mason or get back to him. Starting to think there is a chance he will need to be saving her? Like she might start getting to carried away? Maybe his ark will go somewhere entirely diff tho, she could even end up with Xu or something.. This is torcher in a good kind of way. I tend to think Jills caught up in that same kind of whirlwind. Keeps talking about the slither of going back when she knows she actually only wants to go forward now. In fact the way she put it came across as she is glad even though sounding like she might have regret.. which she clearly does not now. Thats why I find it hard to be resisting still. She seems like she needs them to continue learning?
Chanmac
2019-11-25 20:56:39 +0000 UTCEmory this story continues at it's own pace . I see it never ending as Jill becomes master of her destiny . It would be a sad day to see story end too fast . 100s of pages long never once giving away next move of characters . In fact this is a story that keeps adding ideas to all viewers . No one really has found out Emorys direction . Jill we all need to see having sexual intercourse orgasm baby birth nursing bloody periods acceptance loving her sexuality . Some characters can die slowly stabbed with vengeance rages . Killing them as they reach orgasm dying slow on bed pleading for mercy forgiveness wanting to still live survive . Maybe the sisters will kill each other with heartless intent looking into their eyes as they die crying tears . I just can not tell yet how this is going . Mystery reading by a master writer .
Sky
2019-11-25 16:29:45 +0000 UTCJill... will she be able to avoid being trapped by this all-female manipulation because the deep desire that lies dormant in a woman's heart is to surrender... Jill's path seems to be marked and he only appears through her gestures and intentions. Caught by his own trap. We realize that Jill acts with delicacy towards Mr. Davis, a sign that she will succumb in herself to her own game. Ty EA.
France Day
2019-11-25 15:17:19 +0000 UTCI have the impression that Jill becomes the twin sister of Emilie .... But hey, I could be wrong.
Erica Rost
2019-11-25 05:52:24 +0000 UTCCan I get a image of Jill with/without her bra or both?
Tiki D
2019-11-25 03:44:47 +0000 UTCand Jill became a good actress. I wonder how his sister will react to her ... "brother"
Himan
2019-11-25 03:00:33 +0000 UTCJill is tore inside pretending to seduce a creep like Davis and losing herself.
Tiki D
2019-11-25 00:06:57 +0000 UTCI still want know where Mason is going?
Tiki D
2019-11-25 00:02:26 +0000 UTCAs Jill used her new found feminine nature, the more she is losing her former identity as Jack.
Tiki D
2019-11-24 23:59:33 +0000 UTCI like the part when Jill show off her body and bra.π
Tiki D
2019-11-24 23:54:07 +0000 UTCHe is trying to get inside Jill's head, but she still is playing along.
Tiki D
2019-11-24 23:50:53 +0000 UTCI just know that Mr. Davis is going to slip up at some point and gets caught while trying to get inside Jill's body.
Tiki D
2019-11-24 23:47:31 +0000 UTCI bet Emily is going to find Joey inside Mason 's house as well snooping around for information about her former brother's whereabouts.
Tiki D
2019-11-24 23:42:46 +0000 UTC
