Jack & Jill - Phase 5, 160 -172

Thanks so much, Jess. This was one of my favorites, too. We really start to see the change in Jill's personality here, and her relationship with Holly is deepened.

Emory Ahlberg

For whatever reason, this was probably my favorite J&J. Not sure why. Maybe the plot development? Also really like the new girl. Shes a cutie

Jessica Thence

Aw, these are such kind words, Sky. Thank you so much. The twists are what makes writing J&J so much fun, honestly. I love to keep you all guessing while at the same time building the characters (and making them more beautiful) so that they seem more and more like real people.

Emory Ahlberg

Love the twists and turns surprises Emory . Now Jill has empathy for other trans sexual . How you have changed Jack to Jill the gorgeous is amazing . I thought Jack was pretty nude in the shower . Now Jill is so beautiful big wide eyes full lips hair face is come kiss me now . Jacks body is stunning full hips booty breasts skin smooth legs proportioned . Bring her to life I want her . Can not imagine Jill wanting to return to Jack with her body face sex . Jill should be masturbating to her own nude body in front of a mirror . Looks like maybe that might happen . You keep me guessing have not figured out the ending yet . Great Job Emory

Sky

Yes, perhaps! Maybe as like a 'holiday special. :-)

Emory Ahlberg

Hi Andreas - Yes, I'll shoot you over the link!

Emory Ahlberg

yes

LornaS

Hey emory can i have the all story of jnj saga

Andreas

You mean the "face reveal," Lorna?

Emory Ahlberg

Animal, I think you're quite right on a couple key points. Jill is definitely about to walk down a darker road, one she may or may not be prepared for. Both Mason and Holly have repeatedly warned us about Davis. He's effective but cruel, which is why these days he typically only works on gurls Xu has no personal interest in. No doubt Davis believes 'finalizing' Jack for the dinner will lift him up in Xu's eyes. Will that be the case? Or will he fail, as you predict?

Emory Ahlberg

i still have my angry days but that's from other issues i think. Or the fact i was unable to cry for 5 years. What always gets me is most people think dysphoria is only ever being sad. People forget sadness leads to anger so easily.

Jennifer

I'm happy for you, Chan!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks so much, Bac!

Emory Ahlberg

Hehe - Yes! Phase 6 is where the story will rise to its crescendo. At least, that is the plan!

Emory Ahlberg

A good question, Erica - and one I do intend to (eventually) answer! 😀

Emory Ahlberg

Is there any chance you'll be adding the missing part between Phase 4 pg 89 and the start of Phase 5? It would definitely 'fill in the blanks' so to speak. Love the whole series though regardless. Awesome!!

LornaS

This is such a lovely, fantastic, insightful reply, Chanmac! Reading this made my morning. It’s so rewarding to see you so invested in the characters and story. I can’t wait to show you more. Thank you!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks so much, Arte! The side effect is sometimes I look back at my older stuff and cringe.

Emory Ahlberg

Always so lush. And increasingly so.

Artemesia

I was really angry too and like its a constant agitated itch(?) all gone now.

Chanmac

Let's wait for it to follow with phase 6.

Erica Rost

Who is this mysterious Nicholas, who is Dr. XU's new prisoner?

Erica Rost

lol for me transitioning helped me be less angry but I was mostly angry for being a girl trapped as a boy.

Jennifer

It's true! But her selflessness is a definite departure from Jack. Maybe the estrogen is growing his heart as well as his boobs? 😛

Emory Ahlberg

hey i'm trans too!

Jennifer

oh no! Jill's too sweet for her own good

Jennifer

As someone who is Trans, learning to align to a new "role" sexually (as it seems this is about to go(?) is a really powerful change - it leads to a cascade of other changes you never see/expect coming. In our case its a choice from start tho, but there is still resistance, fear, awkwardness like there would be for anyone. Its intense (like 100x more intense then intense) while at the same time empowering/freeing. It helps drive a lot of the new discovery and development in your new life (or way of) outside just a bedroom... I guess because its validating, but of more then just in obvious ways. In fact I find the Not Obvious to be a whole nother lvl of interesting. Even a trans person in a way has to "give in to" certain things. Complicated to explain I guess.. It seems for the most part Jill has accepted a lot, like the switch already went off; if Jill realizes it or not, as we have been seeing recently. I like this because in most stories its force / aggressive etc, against the will till a point is reached through demoralizing the persons identity enough that they are willing to except there is more to everything. Its not just cuz they gave up or something, its a realization not a giving up. You have been showing hints throughout since the beginning tho that Jack might have always been more Jill then "he" knew.. Looking at Mason in the Shower etc. Id assume that Davis might even show Jill respect since she is being willing. He knows he would be wrecked by Xu if he did something bad... So since Jill agreed it means he can steer her in his devious way without the worry of Xu.. I would find it interesting if Xu in fact himself becomes curious because she chose to; if he finds out - and even if knowing then allow it to play out, because he wants to know why.. Hollys comment at the end.. maybe Davis plans to push her further then just being acquainted with her new identity/body but to turn jill into the things Holly was warning about which would lead to more force and humiliation then so far, as Jill might be excepting being a woman now but this is is a whole nother layer.. (and of coarse you threw in the curve ball that Holly has feelings for Jill too..so if she knows how those girls become in mind and body..) A plot twist would be when the perv makes a move this time Jill does it willingly.. Maybe in the end if this path is a brainwash on a whole nother lvl Mason will be able to bring her back - or shake her out of it if she falls to far into it*cough.. Anyway thats all up to you and for us to find out Lol. My assumption is Jill is going to want to go all the way in the end and Xu will help her. I dunno why so many assume that Xu is just to be escaped from.. the irony being what Jill comes to be and as does seem to be the thing in most cases with Xu the unwilling eventually become the thankful.. Only those coming in are unwilling.. as well is the nature of this whole set up. You have done so good with all this, wish we could see more..Like Xu more in person and involved, perhaps a relationship of some kind as Holly has seen to have done forged between them. She does seem to be becoming more caring rather then aggressive and resistant.. then why run(?) There are far more branching out opportunities from just Jill as you had already started doing lol. But her story is amazing! I kinda hate when it strays from her lol. (In that sense.) Lots of great comments with good ideas also in here! Sry for going long.. Thx for the continuation. Hope all is well with your friends/family and sorry for the loss.

Chanmac

Fantastic!

I see this going badly for a bit. There was No planning from Jill This was just an impulse to help and it will lead Jill towards forced sex with other girls like him, and Then finally being Davis himself. This will also lead to much Humiliation in many ways ( can you say Jill forced to dress like a stripper in front of others and have her breasts pumped in front of the other girls as a warning) I do see that after all of that Jill will revert and eventually Jill will strike back causing Davis to fail again somehow. Mr Xu finding out Davis did all of this without his consent, will have no choice this time but to have Davis turned into the slut he lusts for in all the girls.

animalmusic

Jill does look particularly delicious there, doesn’t she?

Emory Ahlberg

Page 10 ---- Priceless....

findesiecle

As well as Jack fading from Jill's mind.

Tiki D

I'm wondering if Jill will meet Jack subconsciously?

Tiki D

Yes, absolutely. Her character has taken an interesting turn. I'd originally thought she'd go the "Amazonian" route (I mean, look at her!) but more and more she seems to be becoming a mother / fertility figure. To me, that's quite interesting!

Emory Ahlberg

Oh, me too, Tiki. I wonder what form it should take?

Emory Ahlberg

I promise this will be in the next update, Himan. Jill needs to pump soon. 🙂

Emory Ahlberg

I think that's definitely what he has in mind!

Emory Ahlberg

I also want to see Davis still to get punish, too.

Tiki D

I hope that in the next update Jill will have breast milk, I just like it. God, what a pervert I am

Himan

Davis could also being trying to get into Jill's sexy body.

Tiki D

I noticing that Jack is succumbing more to his feminine half more and more. Even Davis is noticing this, too. Jill is being more compassionate, caring, and understanding than Jack. As Jack would panic and fight back with male pride and wits, but Jill is becoming more dominant as smart and emotional.

Tiki D

These are some really great notions, Tiki! I love how you delve into the psychology of the characters. We'll see which of them come true. 😁

Emory Ahlberg

I think the story can go in two ways. I feeling that Davis will take Jill's offer to exchange her for Nickki. This is also opportunity for Jill to learn about more about Mr. Xu and his motives. It's also time for Jill to put her female training to the test from Holly. Instead of using Jack's ,mannerisms, Jill will have to use female psychology to pretend flirt or seduce Davis to get information. As well being a spy for Holly to give her information. Or Davis can be taking Jill to his station within Mr. Xu's estate and there she can meet with Janelle and plot how to take him down. Davis can also being Nick/Nikki as a spy to see what Holly is planning.

Tiki D