The Cave, Part 2
Added 2019-08-18 14:08:02 +0000 UTCWow! Another 71 pages (bringing us to 143 total) and an end to my first magical transformation!
Is Orik able to stop or reverse his transformation at the hands of "Fjellvarder," the mysterious guardian of the valley?
What will Kobr do once he sucks away all of Orik's manhood?
Find out in the conclusion, and please leave a comment and tell me what you think. I adore hearing from you. 😃
Comments
Aw, thanks so much, Jess. 🥰 If I'm honest, this is one of my most favorite things I've ever done.
Emory Ahlberg
2020-01-15 05:57:49 +0000 UTCAs I said before, magic isn't typically my style. But I loved this. A great artist transcends genre! Great work!
Jessica Thence
2020-01-15 03:48:43 +0000 UTCThat is really sweet of you, Amandine! Thank you for being such an amazing patron, and I can't wait to make more art for you. Merci beaucoup! 😁
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-25 09:06:25 +0000 UTCHello, your artwork is stunning, very well used for magical transformation. As we say in french, « une nouvelle corde a ton arc », a new string for your bow. Continu as you do. Thank you.
Chloé1975
2019-08-21 08:57:34 +0000 UTCAw, thanks so so much for commenting, Amandine! Curvy girls are my favorite as well 😄. I already have a couple ideas for a sequel for Orik and her exploration of womanhood now that she’s back home!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-21 08:39:18 +0000 UTCI loved this story and Olrik became so beautiful, I really like curvy women. I hope you will continu other stories with Olrik and what will be her new Life.
Chloé1975
2019-08-20 12:54:20 +0000 UTCInteresting idea, Maven! And I wonder if this is the last we'll see of Orik's story..... 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-20 08:50:16 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Maven! That makes me happy. 😀
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-20 08:47:24 +0000 UTCI loved the whole story!
maven poulter
2019-08-19 23:13:06 +0000 UTCThink about a one or 2 frame alternative ending (Family portrait) ...Kobr and his pregnant wife, Orik...holding her one year old with her 3 year old standing by their side.
maven poulter
2019-08-19 23:12:25 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Stacy. And yes! I’m already brainstorming. 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-19 16:45:43 +0000 UTCGreat stuff....will we be seeing more tales from Dawnland? x
stacy C
2019-08-19 15:15:54 +0000 UTCThank you, Jen! Yeah, Kobr was drunk with power and so he got his just deserts—and he doesn’t even get to be beautiful! 😜 Orik is wearing a “circlet.” You should pick one up, it’d look lovely on you I’m sure!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-19 00:31:19 +0000 UTCGlad the chief saved her. That would've been very dark. It was a very good transformation and I just love whatever that thing is she's wearing on her forehead at the end. I gotta get me one of those lol
Jennifer
2019-08-19 00:16:04 +0000 UTCLOL - I hope that’s a good thing, Leigh! 😁
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-18 23:40:37 +0000 UTCMy goodness.
Leigh
2019-08-18 23:38:47 +0000 UTCThank you for your lovely and fantastic comment, Sky! I truly loved the detailed transformation—and how deliciously curvy and beautiful Orik became!!! As for Orik having sex in her new body, I really hope this isn't the last we see of her. If you amazing patrons wish, we can have another comic featuring her further adventures. After all, she's desperate to become male again so that may lead her to some strange places in the world... 😜
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-18 20:33:31 +0000 UTCDanke, Stormfries!!! 😄 I believe Orik turned out absolutely beautiful, even if she didn't want to become a woman. Hopefully she can make the best of her new situation!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-18 20:21:45 +0000 UTCThat you so much, Arte!!! 😃 I had a hell of a good time illustrating this tale, and I can assure you it certainly won't be our last venture to the Dawnlands... and maybe beyond!
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-18 20:18:03 +0000 UTCLOL - Leaving you wanting more is my main job, JS! 😛
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-18 20:16:32 +0000 UTCThanks Callum! I had an incredible amount much fun with this one, so I'm sure there's more magical transformations in store. As for the ZIP... I really thought I uploaded it! Ugh. Will do as soon as I get home tonight. 😀
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-18 20:15:58 +0000 UTCAw, you're so sweet, France! Thank you very, very much. I can't tell you how much it pleases me to hear you enjoyed it! 😚
Emory Ahlberg
2019-08-18 20:14:04 +0000 UTCI love tg transformation !!! oerfect transformation in body and mind a littel forced or brainwash !!! lg from germany i love youre works
Stormfries
2019-08-18 19:25:47 +0000 UTCFun fantasy story loved the complete transformation details . Having the characters talk adds a personal connection . It would have been erotic to watch her having sexual intercourse with a man or woman . She sure is beautiful face body . Makes reader wonder what a real true sex change would be like . Real meaning former male is beautiful .no person can complain about being beautiful . It would suck being ugly woman body and face . I loved seeing vagina develop close attention to lips clit opening vagina as penis shrinks . Her face experiencing pain of body changing and fear anger hope to change back . I suspect almost everyone would like to know how it feels to have a uber woman or man body .
Sky
2019-08-18 19:13:00 +0000 UTCYou capture the in-between parts of the transformation like no other. I know that magic is not your usual style but it gives you the ability to illustrate the transition in a fantastic way! Great ending to the story. I hope this won't be your last.
Artemesia
2019-08-18 15:34:01 +0000 UTCHmm. Why do I feel like I want more.?
JS
2019-08-18 15:27:08 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed this and wouldn't object to more magical transformations. Will there be a zip file version?
Callum MacDonald
2019-08-18 14:52:17 +0000 UTCDear EA, you are very talented and I have just discovered that in you lies an alchemist and all his mysticism. Another beautiful pilgrimage in this enchanted world of magic, words, and subtlety of your imagination, 1000 ty.
France Day
2019-08-18 14:43:59 +0000 UTC
