Bratty Daphne (Ch. 3 - Where She Belongs: Part I) *re-upload*
Added 2024-12-04 03:31:46 +0000 UTCHere is Chapter 3 of Bratty Daphne. I have attached the chapter as a PDF until I find a better solution.
I am working on the EPUB formatting next, for those who prefer that.
What are your thoughts on the formatting? Is it readable? Text size? Font? Line-height, etc? I tried to fiddle with it, but it is likely something that I will just have to perfect over time.
EDIT: I have attached a new PDF with increased font size that should make it easier to read on mobile! Thanks for the feedback :) Let me know how it feels now, and I will continue to make adjustments for future uploads.
Comments
When can we expect the second part?
Dave Hal
2024-12-15 08:49:11 +0000 UTCThe mobile pdf is a lot better, thanks
0029096
2024-12-05 12:43:58 +0000 UTCHmm. The PDF is still there on my side? And others seem to have found it as well. Maybe it is just a bit difficult to access on your device? I don't know how Patreon presents attachments on various devices, but maybe it would be good with another look as it should be there somewhere :)
LuckyQuaffle
2024-12-05 02:51:48 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback! I have re-uploaded a PDF with larger text and will do that for future uploads also :) Also, I have now re-uploaded the other missing chapters.
LuckyQuaffle
2024-12-05 02:49:08 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback! I have re-uploaded a PDF with larger text and will do that for future uploads also :) Also, I have now re-uploaded the other missing chapters.
LuckyQuaffle
2024-12-05 02:48:44 +0000 UTCText could be a little bigger, it’s quite small on mobile. That being said looks good.
Bellerophon
2024-12-04 19:17:46 +0000 UTCPDF is gone it seems
Daeron Targaryen
2024-12-04 16:05:13 +0000 UTCPersonally, I would prefer the text to be bigger, other than that it was good
0029096
2024-12-04 12:27:02 +0000 UTC
