Note 10/19/25
Added 2025-10-19 09:56:05 +0000 UTCIf you have read Chapter 133, do you want me to modify the previous chapters as well as Chapter 133 to remove the interaction between Alvida and Marcus, delaying it until much much much later? Or should I keep it as it is and not focus on it? Until end of poll, no chapters for OP: AMP.
Comments
I’m fine with that too if the relationship was told at the beginning because other one piece fanfic either have harems or dating one of the crew but I’m just tired of those repeat story’s after skimming their intro. So I’m just going to wait for more lotr Minecraft story and ask after scribblehub catches up if Marcus is dating any other woman so I can finally give up this story.(after giving it some thought the hint was told in front of my face with the image for the story.)
Zilver 51
2025-10-20 06:29:26 +0000 UTCI think it is fine due to how well the overall plot is going with focusing on the main character. We know how the story should go so any additions added to him is always nice to read. I would suggest it being a very sparse addition though as it has been over 100 chapters without it. A relationship with those two is good since the new additions keep the story with a sense of their being 2 crews in the straw hats without any clashing so far. Luffy can be the funny hopeful side and Marcus can be the more serious side so a little adult action is ok. I would again wait a looooong time before writing anymore.
Nixon carrera
2025-10-20 03:11:06 +0000 UTCTry reading Chapter 132 (NSFW) + 133 again. Should be a bit better now
Malphegor
2025-10-19 20:30:09 +0000 UTCLooks like I’m the only one that hated the drug sex scene.
Zilver 51
2025-10-19 19:35:11 +0000 UTC
