Quick Note RE: Give Yourself to Me Ch. 17
Added 2024-06-02 11:34:37 +0000 UTCHey y'all, a few hours ago I published chapter 17 of GYtM on here, but I kept rereading it and not really loving where it was at. It didn't quite flow the way I wanted, and it's a pretty pivotal chapter, so I really want to make sure I'm happy with it. I've taken it down for now, and will republish it sometime tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for understanding!
Comments
The broad strokes are the same, I just adjusted the order around and tweaked the ending. Just little things to make it gel together a little better.
Luke
2024-06-04 11:34:50 +0000 UTCAhh I see the new one now. What should we look for in terms of changes?
stevebasic
2024-06-04 11:03:39 +0000 UTCSounds good! Excited for the 7 foot mark being hit ;)
Beetlebomb
2024-06-03 01:40:52 +0000 UTC
