BoundByDuty Page 03 - Stages 4/4
Added 2023-01-23 03:24:19 +0000 UTCUpdate 2:
Shading added! Working on the finishing touches!
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Update 1:
Finished the base coloring and background design! Had some stuff to do with family during the weekend, but I hope to finish the page soon!
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Page 03 woohoo! As promised I decided to do a little change.
The original exposition story was told in 2 pages backflash scene, but I thought its better to keep it short. Maybe Chuckle's devious personality doesn't come through well without his dialogue but I think we all want to get to the "important" part of the story, right?
See you all soon!
Comments
Heya Knight! Yeah, with this page being improvised the dialogue got a bit messy :D Thanks for the headsup! I think I only don't agree with the second one, as I feel like it fits better along the lines that "he plans something" is more of statement about him in general than a retelling of him actually planning something, but I go with your version just in case
RobCivecat
2023-02-02 18:53:56 +0000 UTCLoving how the comic is progressing. A few typos/grammatical errors: "Whimpy" is spelt wimpy (panel 1); "...that he plans to do something... should be "...that he would have plans... OR ...that he planned... (panel 2); "...and all that got him a few extra..." should be "and all that got him was a few extra..." (panel 3)
JKnight97
2023-02-02 16:36:16 +0000 UTCThanks, I'm glad you like it! And yeah I noticed that mistake too after I made this post, thanks for letting me know :)
RobCivecat
2023-01-23 12:23:20 +0000 UTCThank you! I'm happy how it turned out as well!
RobCivecat
2023-01-23 12:22:29 +0000 UTCGreat expressions and action posing all around. I can almost imagine Judy in the second panel thinking "Really? When we're just snuggling Nick is more aggressive and threatening then this." Nick just isn't used to seeing it from a non-participating viewpoint. Also, third panel, a possible typo. IF => IS I believe "...SO ALL IF GOOD AT THE END." should be "...SO ALL IS GOOD AT THE END."
InTheLionsDen
2023-01-23 05:04:06 +0000 UTCHe face in panel 2 is absolutely adorable, loving this so far.
Mj111994
2023-01-23 03:39:56 +0000 UTC
