Sponsored Lewd - 2021 January - WIPs
Added 2021-02-14 11:31:04 +0000 UTCHello Lewd Crew! It's almost lewding time!
Anyone here likes Aggretsuko? No? Just me? Nevermind, just enjoy this funny lewd I've been planning with Haida and Retsuko!
If you guys don't mind, I'm would like to ask a for your opinions on a few details!
I thought it would be a fun detail if Retsuko reacted to the act with a metal "inside-voice". I had many ideas for her to scream like "WHY THE F***K IS YOUR D**K SO BIG?" or just simply have a triumphant "I GOT A BIG D***CKED BOYFRIEND!!* roar. What do you think? Is it too much? And which version do you like more?
Also funny thing, I originally drew them with barefoot (see version 2) because I'm so used to that Zootopian universe rules, but then I remembered that in Aggretsuko they do wear shoes, so I quickly designed some nice boots for Haida. I guess they could've taken off their shoes when they entered wherever in the white void they are, but I kinda like like the boots version better cuz it fits the source material more and brings Haida's rocker look together. But let me know what you think, I don't think that difference is worth making 2 versions of but maybe it is. Let me know!
That's all for now, see you all soon!
P.S: Happy Valentine's Day!
[Update: 22th Feb]
Thank you for all the positive feedback on this one! I'll be sticking with the original dialogue for Retsuko's inner voice, in the meantime, as I was drawing the piece, I had the desire to also draw a SFW version of them pic! I will do my best to finish this piece this week and hopefully do something more during the weekend! See you all soon!
[Update: 28th Feb]
Thank you guys for your patience! I got tied up with some stuff, and only could add the finishing touches to the pic today, but I hope it was worth the wait! I added to basecolor and the shading to the wip post!
Comments
Very much a HaidaxRetsuko shipper as well. The inner voice dialogue you have going is okay as is and the boots version works as well.
JKnight97
2021-02-22 02:53:08 +0000 UTCThese are fantastic, I love Aggretsuko, and the inner metal voice here is perfect. (At least according to anime?) In Japan it's most common for people to take their shoes off in someone's home, and regardless it's easy enough to assume they had time to kick their shoes off. The chibi style of the show, i think, mostly depicts them in socks, but I'd have to rewatch some at home scenes to be sure. Either way, I wouldn't worry too much about it. Keep up the fantastic work đ
MageKiton
2021-02-15 10:05:14 +0000 UTCGiven his state of dress it looks like the act was initiated before he had time to undress so since the culture of this series includes shoes I think the shoes being on him fits better. The depiction of the inside voice definitely works. I agree with Ztpia that I prefer the inside voice as depicted in the artwork, though the two examples in the notes could also work.
InTheLionsDen
2021-02-14 20:50:21 +0000 UTCI'm actually a fan of the current (in-picutre) metal inside-voice as it's positive towards Haida (the two examples in the writeup either negative or bit detached from the scene). As a Zootopia junkie, I'm a fan of no shoes, but both work!!
Ztpia
2021-02-14 16:04:18 +0000 UTC
