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MysticStripSearch - Page 16 - WIP

Hello Lewd Crew! Working on the next page, I realized I haven't actually written down the 3rd (and probably final) act of the comic yet. As I believe all of my supporters should have a say in what comes (or most probably comes) next,  I think it's important to give you an option the see a rough script about it! I will do my best to provide that this week before I finis this page! Hope you will like it!

Until that, enjoy Nick struggling to keep his eyes open for his contact, while Judy enjoys herself!

MysticStripSearch - Page 16 - WIP

Comments

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m42

IMO the drooling in the last panel is a bit much. It makes Nick look like a mindless sex-crazed zombie, even with the speech bubbles. Everything else is great though. :)

Brad

Looking really good can't wait for the climax 😉

The action is coming along great. Good angles and his attempt at keeping some control is fun to see.

InTheLionsDen

It's got a very good natural progression

Cats n' Cameras

Thank you! Glad to hear that! I was thinking a lot on the page layout!

RobCivecat

Fantastic page so far :)

Cats n' Cameras


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