MysticStripSearch - Page 01 - WIP

Hello LewdCrew!

Gosh, this took longer than I expected it to be. I had several issues just sketching up this page!

First: Judy's getup
I wanted something new and unique, instead of always portraying the characters in the same casual or work clothes we have seen in the movie, I wanted to give her something that fits her kinda tomboyish/sporty style while also expressing her female charm, but I'm a bit worried that the end result is a little bit weird? I'm not a fashion designer, so let me know what you think!

Second: The background
God, nearly 8 hours of lineart work on the first panel today. I thought the 3d model would help me out, but instead it put me up against impossible task of drawing perfectly straight lines. The resolution of my tablet and the sensetivity of my pen makes that extremly difficoutl, so after a while I thought I will try to make the lines a bit sketchy instead, with different width and strenght all over the place, giving it a more a hand-drawn comic book look. I hope the style will look nice when I manage to color it.

Third: The title!
I've taken Tony's name tip and named the comic "Mystic Strip Search"
As I drew up the Oasis building, It occured that it would be a fun way to show the title by replacing the building's sign with it. However It occured to me, that I usually don't need to show the title on the first page, because I actually draw cover pages for the comic, and I also have cover page idea for this one that I would like to do. But I also like the idea of having the title on the building. What do you guys think? It's okay to have a cover image and also make the title appear on the first page, or It's too much?

Forth: The time...
Realising it's already Wednesday night, and I will probably have to get back to work on Friday, which leaves me with only one more day of lewdness. Which I want to spend on drawing for the sketch suggestion box! I didn't revice any more suggestions to the "'18 Spring" suggestion box, so I'll choose some I got submitted to me anonymously on ZTG. But if you do have some lewd ideas you want me make a quick sketch of, feel free to leave a comment of it below!

That's all for now! Thank you all for your help and support, hope we are going to have a great summer together!

-RobCivecat