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Torrida Minis
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Judge Anderson wip01

Hi!

I'm already working on my new long-term project without a fixed deadline: Judge Anderson. So far I was only able to make a rough pose and then work on the head, and you can see how things are going in these preview images.

Since there's no need to rush with this project, I'm a lot more open to feedback, in case anybody wants to suggest anything to improve the model.

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Comments

Looking great so far!

MeEarthPrime

Looking at it again, it seems that the disconnect is between the torso and the legs. The torso is “S-shaped”, which would be fine with appropriate leg positions. But the straight-leg, flat-footed stance doesn’t match.

Greyermine

My only gripe is the boobs. Too large for torso size, and hanging too low. I understand the pose (leaning forward and ass protruding), but the boobs are inconsistent to the rest. Also, arms seem too short, and shoulders not wide enough (again, to support such boobs).

Max

That posture is definitely not right, I can’t imagine how she could walk with a spine that shape. If she is supposed to be leaning forward, the spine wouldn’t be as concave as it appears in the render.

Greyermine

Something seems awkward about the pose. She doesn't seem to be standing up straight enough. Butt/back doesn't look natural.

Mark Fergel


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