Short Story Reward - Mass Effect: Final Error (Part 6)

Whew! The editing pass took a lot longer than I'd hoped. But, considering that I was editing the entire 45,000 plus words this story has now grown to, I suppose it was no surprise. In fact, I was probably doing well to manage that in 2 days. Still, it's done! And the total size of the new content came in right about there I wanted it to be. I was aiming for around 10k, and the final count was 9,750 words. Probably plus a little since I made a few minor tweaks and improvements throughout the rest of the story. As for the size of it, please remember that the reason it's so massive is that it's effectively the combined 2nd story reward for February and March both. Sorry about the delay, but I hope all is forgiven with a double sized release of a story that keeps almost winning the story poll.

Anyway, I'm very happy with the result, and the PDF is attached. As usual with this story, I made it a combined file with previous releases, so if you only want to read the new stuff, simply search "End of Part 5" without the quotes, within the PDF.

NOW DON'T READ FARTHER IF YOU DON'T WANT A MINOR SPOILER

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Alright, you were warned! I wanted to mention one thing about this story, because it wasn't actually something I had planned. Specifically, that there is some chastity content in the latest release. Believe it or not, I had intended never to introduce that particular kink to this particular story, Mostly because, frankly, a lot of my other ongoing works already use it. Strange as it may be to realize, but it's not actually like, a personal defining fetish for me. I think it's a fun kink used right, or I'd never have made Chastity Quest. But it's not something I feel the need to define all my work around. And I was afraid it was starting to become that way with how many of my stories make use of it.

Which means I was actually slightly irked when it decided to write itself into this story T-T. The problem was that, the scene that popped into my head was so utterly perfect for what I wanted to accomplish, that every attempt to put it aside resulted in inferior versions of the scene. So, ultimately, I just sort of wanted to explain myself. Unless I run a poll and find that people want to see more of it( Possible, given that many people likely came to my Patreon because of Chastity Quest), it's likely to be a one-off occurrence in Final Error. So, if that's not your thing...don't worry too much over it. Particularly as it's only one of two sex scenes in this release!