March 15, 2025 - Update
Added 2025-03-15 06:22:00 +0000 UTCHi!
I really appreciate all the comments and opinions on the update from last week. It helped me a lot. I had a good week writing and even managed to produce a couple of Divine Awakening chapters. Hopefully that is something I can continue.
I opened chapters 4, 5, and 6 for Root.
I opened chapters 7, 8, and 9 for Harvester.
I added chapters 10, 11, and 12 for Step Master, Blapy’s Favorite, Divine, and Axiom.
Enjoy!
Thank you for supporting these stories.
Take care,
AFK
Comments
Ok, Youtube the band Blind Guardian. Start with songs "At the edge of time", "Control the Divine", "Prophesies". If you have any adrenaline left check out Rhapsody of Fire's "Raging Starfire", "Chaos to Eternity", and "Kreel's Magic Staff".
Mark Roudabush
2025-03-20 19:15:51 +0000 UTCI purposely waited until now to read the first 12 chapters in one go. I feel like near the end of book 11 the stress your were under translated into your writing somewhat, and reading it felt a bit like a necessary grind. With the start of book 12, the writing feels like joy has returned to the world. Maybe it's just a wide reflection of "scene followed by sequel," but the homey scenes make me eager to read more as Ruwen continues to blaze a path to wherever he is going.
Scott Emery
2025-03-16 06:15:25 +0000 UTC
