Divine Apostasy Book 10 - Chapter 38
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Comments
Excellent point!!!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A. F. Kay
2024-07-02 01:39:01 +0000 UTCthank you! Fixed!
A. F. Kay
2024-07-02 01:36:34 +0000 UTC😆 great chapter! It was nice to see Ruwen get a win without losing something or someone important. Just some little bobos to his core.
Jake Schmitt
2024-07-01 18:04:33 +0000 UTC"Uru had sealed the man’s memories of the Spirit Realm away." Miranda did this for Lylan's coin from the spirit Realm not Uru.
Jake Schmitt
2024-07-01 17:57:36 +0000 UTC"We need to consider just unhiding the System for everyone" this sentence feels weird. Maybe, reveal the system, or something like that
Jake Schmitt
2024-07-01 17:52:56 +0000 UTCHaha this is hilarious...and true. I love the backpack.
A. F. Kay
2024-06-24 20:54:26 +0000 UTC“After he recovered from the Shadow Step practice” 😂😂 The absolute disconnect between Ruwen and the enormity of manhandling a God is high tier disrespect to all the so called powerhouses of this universe. Ruwen could make the most absurd but legitimate threats to deities and have them genuinely shaking, “listen bub, my brain is a million times bigger than yours and if you don’t obey me I’ll brain zap ya or poke ya in the wrong places or better yet cut ye down with a merry tune” then Ruwen proceeds to stuff the God in some chest facing chihuahua backpack
John
2024-06-24 18:51:44 +0000 UTCI understand. Maybe flesh out the offhand comments in the following chapter? Ruwen says it went as expected,a bit boring really?
Ori Shifrin
2024-06-23 19:55:55 +0000 UTCI understand this feeling and was/am concerned about it. I almost never do this. I tend to show everything as the progression is my favorite part. In this book I've experimented with both a montage and skipping what I considered the least interesting part of that interaction. Ruwen had already won. Perhaps it can be a short story sometime. Similar to Ruwen and Bliz's herb gathering trips.
A. F. Kay
2024-06-23 19:51:34 +0000 UTCSoo,Ruwen fought Cleo.. last chapter,but no details of Cleo yielding or the immediate aftermath,just a jump? Feels a bit abrupt,like a chapter is missing
Ori Shifrin
2024-06-22 09:13:41 +0000 UTCThe great Goddess Urdu has been corrupted with blood mages and witches becoming available… well some of the fanatics will say that
Samuel Strode
2024-06-22 07:13:24 +0000 UTC
