Divine Apostasy Book 9 - Chapter 54
Added 2023-11-18 08:36:08 +0000 UTCThis book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.
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Comments
Wow! Great stuff!!!
Joe
2023-12-16 02:53:41 +0000 UTCThat is a great question. I need to think about that.
A. F. Kay
2023-12-16 02:42:24 +0000 UTCSam and Jake you have broken the System. I love it.
A. F. Kay
2023-12-16 02:41:50 +0000 UTCI know, I just cant seem to help myself.
A. F. Kay
2023-12-16 02:40:53 +0000 UTCSorry for being so late to these comments. They're great. And I'll take note of the Sift scarcity.
A. F. Kay
2023-12-16 02:40:38 +0000 UTCThat would be great! Speaking of Sift, I hope he gets some more time in the next chapters feels like he's been gone a lot since the Master's test.
Jake Schmitt
2023-11-23 09:46:42 +0000 UTCSo could Ruwen's positive luck be used to even out Tarrot's Negative luck effect? Then giving Ruwen more luck to work with? I see the restriction that Liquid luck doesn't benefit the Alchemist that made it but Tarrot is a "person" so would it be Ruwen benefiting from it or Tarrot?(I put quotations on person cause I don't know would Tarrot be a sapient being with a soul or not?)
Jake Schmitt
2023-11-23 09:39:31 +0000 UTCIt just says luck, not good or bad. This would have been great as a joke when he had bad luck and it would have temporarily negated the bad luck.
Jake Schmitt
2023-11-23 08:53:43 +0000 UTCOnce Fractal gets the Godstone working (and they know it works), I think Sift should be the first person they test in on. Ruwen "Hey Sift, hold this" .. lol
Pannath
2023-11-21 14:38:11 +0000 UTCI think ruwen would be to nice for that because the luck would make the chance of sift dieing smaller
Frederik
2023-11-21 10:35:08 +0000 UTCI wonder how that potion will work when his karmic luck is bad and really makes me wonder if Pen had the same skill
Samuel Strode
2023-11-18 21:29:30 +0000 UTCThanks, AFK! You rock! I have always taken cliff hangers as "the price of doing business." But this is very nice! Thank you.
Joe
2023-11-18 17:29:58 +0000 UTCWhen i read the previous chapter, i assumed the recipe would be shown at the top... and I was thinking "That's not like A.F. Kay.. he's a bastard who loves to cliff hanger us." Then I got to the bottom and no recipe... but you showed us part of the next chapter. haha I can just see Sift pestering Ruwen for Luck. Maybe Ruwen can get some revenge and issue Sift a quest to make him food for 5 days in a row or something similar, and the reward would be Ruwen making him a vial of Liquid Luck... but Ruwen keeps disappearing on the last day so Sift can't complete it. Then he would know how Ruwen felt... Wouldn't that be some irony. Pay back is coming for Sift!
Pannath
2023-11-18 12:26:23 +0000 UTCWow that's a crazy addition.
Dustin Sago
2023-11-18 11:40:35 +0000 UTCI was about to call you out for the cliff but you are an angel
frankie doerr
2023-11-18 09:43:26 +0000 UTCThanks for the non monstrous addition
Jeremiah Halstead
2023-11-18 08:46:58 +0000 UTC
