Divine Apostasy Book 9 - Chapter 42
Added 2023-10-21 06:58:45 +0000 UTCThis book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.
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Comments
That is great feedback. Thank you! I think my second revision on this book is going to be massive to fix some of the issues like this.
A. F. Kay
2023-11-04 14:32:21 +0000 UTCI feel there is kinda lack of direction. Like random things happening like rift and ruwen goes to this space to explore. Even after all these chapters I miss what is happening everywhere else and everything feels so fragmented.
abirami nandagopal
2023-11-04 08:50:43 +0000 UTCThanks for all the great discussion. This has probably gone on a bit longer than I intended, but is getting rectified soon.
A. F. Kay
2023-11-04 06:30:01 +0000 UTCThat is a great observation! Thank you!
A. F. Kay
2023-10-28 07:20:26 +0000 UTCI mentioned this in the comments of the last chapter, but this Minor Prelude of Heresy seems like his Divine Presence that he used shortly after Fortifying to Angel. He was able to shut down Sift's ability to fly with soul energy by extending his presence maybe Ruwen can use this to figure the link between his Divine Presence and Minor Prelude of Heresy to see how these new "Harmonic Spells" seem to work and how to fuel them with spirit or soul power not just mental power. Also the touch of how Ruwen's mental landscape has changed is torture. I need to see how many planets there are. 10 maybe? Or is that another Muse?
Jake Schmitt
2023-10-23 18:43:49 +0000 UTCNot reading may have had an impact on Ruwen but right now reading is not a high priority on his list and if he can share some of his burden to someone like Rami this allows him to focus on other things. She does it better and faster than him anyway. If he takes time reading for a little enjoyment then what does he sacrifice to make that time available. He's got Quests, Fortifying, Step training, A Universe with little to no Spirt that is on the verge of collapse, a country of people to maintain and care for, and friends that need him too. Reading isn't all that important at this time. I'm sure Ruwen will get around to fixing that issue at some point but right now he's got enough on his plate.
Jake Schmitt
2023-10-23 17:44:52 +0000 UTCRami loves having the Knowledge before Ruwen so much, she is keeping things from him and is the one making his quest decisions, he's not pressing the button. If Ruwen isn't allowed to read books, she shouldn't be allowed either. This would actually give Rami incentive to try to fix Ruwen's issue. Right now she has no incentive, she's perfectly happy. She fucked over Ruwen and he's the only one who got the consequences.
Pannath
2023-10-22 05:06:22 +0000 UTCRami is a book worm books are her food book 1 Rami said I am hungry too. She ate the knowledge of books
Samuel Strode
2023-10-22 03:07:16 +0000 UTCOf course its not fair. But while her thirst for new knowledge has caused much risk. She has been extremely responsible for the information she does have. Also, how can you not trust rami and this point? She has demonstrated her worthiness again and again. #morebooksforrami
Inv7ctus
2023-10-21 21:19:28 +0000 UTCI don't think it's fair Rami is allowed to read books when Ruwen can't. Her inability to keep her book addiction in check almost killed her AND Ruwen, and it fractured Ruwen's mind. Now Ruwen can't read anymore for fear of what will happen, while Rami didn't get any punishment and keeps getting to not only read, but mess with Ruwen's mind and keep stuff from him. She is NOT responsible when it comes to information. And I'm still not so sure she won't mess with his head if Miranda asks her to. #nomorebooksforrami
Pannath
2023-10-21 17:35:15 +0000 UTC
