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Divine Apostasy Book 9 - Chapter 3

[Author's Note: I changed the previous chapter and now Rami leaves to check on Xavier before Ruwen steps through the portal. That means Rami is no longer with Ruwen for this chapter. Also, I am still not 100% sure on the direction I am taking so this might change. Please keep the comments coming...I appreciate them a lot. Thanks.]

Chapter 3

Ruwen stepped into an unfamiliar room, the walls, ceiling, and floor made from white stone. The air had a clean scent, like after a thunderstorm, and Hamma sat in a chair next to the lone bed. On the other side of the bed Madda and Padda sat, both focused intently on Sift. The ceiling provided bright but not blinding light, and completely illuminated the fifteen-by-fifteen-foot room.

Not wanting to startle anyone, Ruwen lightly tapped on the wall he’d emerged from. Everyone looked over except Sift, and Hamma smiled at seeing him.

Ruwen returned the smile and moved over to Hamma, giving her a quick hug. He nodded a greeting to the solemn Addas and they returned it.

Sift lay on the bed, his eyes closed, and Shelly sat in the middle of his chest, eyes also closed. They both looked like they were sleeping.

“How is he?” Ruwen whispered.

Hamma glanced quickly at the Addas before responding in the same whisper. “Perfectly healthy. Shelly too from what I can tell. I don’t understand why they’re both unconscious.”

Ruwen gave Hamma’s hand a squeeze, and then moved to the other side of the bed and knelt next to the Addas. “He and Shelly saved the entire planet. Millions of lives.”

“We know,” Madda said.

“It was my idea for them to try,” Ruwen said, not wanting to hide the fact from Sift’s parents.

“We know, son,” Padda replied, patting Ruwen’s shoulder. “We don’t blame you.”

Ruwen nodded in relief. “I know Sift, and nothing will stop him from returning and rubbing this success in my face.”

Madda smiled. “That is probably true.”

“Hamma told us what happened on Grave,” Padda said.

“Is it true?” Madda asked. “Do you have your wings?” she touched Ruwen’s chest. “I sense nothing.”

“I have them, and I’ll explain more later. Now that the other deities know, I expect a massive attack soon.”

The Addas remained quiet for a few seconds before Madda spoke. “Do we have you to thank for Sift’s progress? It’s obvious he broke through to Gem. I don’t understand how that’s possible.”

Ruwen shook his head before nodding at Hamma. “She did it by giving up all her precious wishes.”

The Addas both bowed to Hamma from their seated positions.

Madda spoke quietly. “An immense act of unselfishness.”

Hamma blushed. “The choice was easy.”

Padda turned his attention from Hamma to Ruwen. “We want to support Sift and the choices he’s made. Tell us how we can help.”

Ruwen had feared the Addas would blame him for this situation, but the opposite had happened. They wanted to help, but he couldn’t put them in danger right after what had happened to Sift.

Madda’s stern look returned. “No arguments.”

Ruwen smiled even though he felt frustrated at how easily everyone could read him. “When Sift wakes up, if you could warn the Cultivators west of New Eiru about the imminent attacks, I would appreciate it. I’m not sure when I can get there, but their whole community might be in danger. It would be safer for them to, in the short term, move closer to New Eiru.”

“We’ll see to it,” Padda said.

“Thank you,” Ruwen responded before returning to Hamma’s side. “Where are we?”

“In one of the Chapal hospitals in the Pyramid,” Hamma responded.

Ruwen glanced around. He hadn’t even known the Pyramid had hospitals. Returning his attention back to Sift, he whispered to Hamma. “I’m going to see if I can sense what’s going on.” When she didn’t protest, he focused on Sift and used Harmony to study the state of his friend.

Ruwen didn’t have any experience yet using Harmony to determine what ailed someone, but he figured it couldn’t hurt to see if anything obvious appeared that might help Hamma.

Harmony wrapped Sift and Shelly and the staggeringly complex symphony that made up their bodies burst into sound and color, saturating Ruwen’s senses. He concentrated on Sift’s head, moving through the harmonic layers, and looking for any kind of discordant notes. Finding nothing, Ruwen slowly moved down Sift’s body, stopping suddenly when he reached the chest.

What felt like weeks ago, but had only been yesterday, Ruwen had heard Sift’s soul, and actually felt its form, a cone with a base, the two sides creating a perfect two-sided geometric shape. It had required Ruwen to focus intently on Sift’s soul to accomplish that.

Now though, Ruwen had barely pushed into Sift’s torso when he heard notes, and they sounded different than yesterday. Cautiously, Ruwen pushed deeper with Harmony, the notes becoming louder, and to his shock, another set appeared, harmonizing perfectly. The melody the combination of notes created stunned him and for a few seconds he just listened, reluctant to change anything and lose the ability to hear the beautiful sound.

Shaking off the hypnotic effect, Ruwen pushed deeper, probing for the source, and quickly found it. Just like he’d suspected, Sift had changed.

Instead of a cone with a base, containing two sides, the structure of Sift’s soul had morphed into a cylinder, the ends both perfectly flat. Stunned, Ruwen pulled back and checked Shelly, finding the tortoise generated its soul notes from the two-surface cone shaped exactly like Sift’s soul had been yesterday.

The obvious conclusion was that Sift and Shelly had somehow both leveled their souls.

Ruwen did his best to keep his face neutral, not wanting to give away Sift’s or Shelly’s secrets. He quickly checked the rest of their bodies but found nothing wrong.

“Nothing,” Ruwen said. “They both seem fine.”

Ruwen accessed his Architect Role and created the chocolate cake Sift loved. A small shelf ran along the wall that contained the door, and he placed the cake there.

“Tell Sift—”

Ruwen stopped as Sift opened his eyes and sat up, catching Shelly before she hit the bed.

“I smell cake,” Sift said, and then immediately held Shelly up to his eyes. “Are you okay?”

Shelly, as if linked to Sift’s state, had awoken as well, her tiny legs moving. He sighed in relief and went still, as if realizing for the first time, everyone around him. He slowly turned to see his parents and then shifted his gaze to Hamma, finally flicking his eyes up to see Ruwen standing by the door.

“Why is everyone staring at me?” Sift asked and then cocked his head and repeated his earlier statement. “I smell cake.”

Ruwen grinned, thankfulness filling him. He stepped up behind Hamma, who had already pushed Sift down into the bed.

“Lay down and rest,” Hamma scolded.

“I’m fine,” Sift replied. “But I could really use a piece of that cake. Better bring a couple, I think Shelly wants one, too.”

“Do you remember what happened?” Ruwen asked.

“Sure, I do. Shelly was awesomely brave and swallowed the entire explosion, and then it was bright, and I got tingly.” Sift narrowed his eyes. “If you made that cake it doesn’t count against what you owe me.”

“Don’t worry,” Ruwen responded. “This one’s on me.”

“Where’s Lylan?” Sift asked.

Hamma stiffened, and I put a hand on her shoulder.

“First, she’s fine,” Ruwen said. He actually didn’t know that for sure, but he knew she still lived and from the brief movement he’d seen on his map, was moving around. “We got attacked and she ended up teleporting south.”

Sift sat up quickly, moving his legs to the side and standing. He swayed and immediately collapsed. Hamma and Madda both caught him, and laid him back into the bed.

“I’m fine,” Sift said. “Just a little dizzy. We need to go get her.”

“I know,” Ruwen agreed. “And we will. I bargained with Blapy to get her exact position and its updating in real time. She’s fine and if you show up stumbling around because you haven’t recovered from saving a planet, she’ll stab you.”

“That’s true,” Sift admitted.

“I need to talk to someone, and make a short trip,” Ruwen said. “I’ll come back here immediately when I’m done, and we can go fetch Lylan. Deal?”

“How long?”

“A couple of hours tops. And if Hamma says you’re good to go, we’ll set off immediately.”

“Fine,” Sift agreed.

Ruwen nodded at Madda and Padda. “The good news is your parents are really interested in how you transitioned to Gem. The time should fly by with everything you need to discuss.”

Sift smiled weakly at his parents before glaring at Ruwen.

Ruwen pushed down a laugh, winked at Sift, and signed in Shade Speak. No. Good. Deed. Unpunished.

“I’ll be back before you know it,” Ruwen said out loud. He leaned down and whispered to Hamma. “Thanks for taking care of everyone.”

Hamma smiled and Ruwen kissed her cheek. Then he stood, waved at the three Addas, and returned through the still open portal back to the Shattered Sun. The portal disappeared and he touched the wall, “Dungeon Master’s Lair,” he said and stepped through the new opening that appeared.

Ruwen shook his head at the mass of stones, crystals, and gems covering the floor. He didn’t even have furniture in here yet. There’d be time for that later.

Lir, can you ask Uru if we can meet, please.

Of course, one moment. Then a second later, Lir responded. Yes. Shall I open a portal?

Yes, please.

An eight-foot oval appeared in front of Ruwen, and he let out a deep breath. He took a few seconds to organize his thoughts and stepped through.

Ruwen had expected to enter the library hallway in front of his room in Deepwell, but instead, he strode into a larger room with smooth stone walls, obviously created with magic, and covered in gate rune doors. The cool air surprised him, and with a glance at his map he immediately knew where he’d gone: the cultivator camp in the mountains west of New Eiru.

Uru sat on a stone bench that ran beside a long stone table, and she didn’t sit alone. Uru, and three familiar figures looked up at him.

Kaylin, the smallest of them, stood and moved toward Ruwen. A youthful woman not yet a hundred, she had thin features, dark eyes, and high cheekbones. Her stance signaled danger, similar to Lylan’s, and it distracted from her undeniable beauty. Just like in the Spirit Realm, her hair was pulled back into a tight bun.

Mica followed Kaylin. He’d cut his dark shaggy hair and now it bristled, the shortness reminiscent of a brawler. His angular face matched his thin muscular frame, and he stood level with Ruwen, at just over six feet tall.

Una had combined her sandy brown braids into a larger braid down her back. Her oval face looked softer than Kaylin's, but Una’s brown eyes were just as hard.

Kaylin opened her arms and smiled. Ruwen stepped forward into the hug.

“It’s good to see you,” Ruwen said.

Kaylin stepped back and looked Ruwen over. “You feel like granite.”

Ruwen gave a wry smile. “I’ve been working out.”

Mica grabbed Ruwen’s forearm and pulled him into a quick hug. “It’s good to see you again, kid.”

Una slapped Mica on the shoulder. “Quit hogging him.” Mica moved with a grin and Una squeezed Ruwen tightly. “We worried you wouldn’t make it through the war.”

“And now he’s gone and started another,” Kaylin said.

Una let Ruwen go, and he looked at Kaylin. “News travels fast.”

“Who would have thought the gods were a bunch of gossips,” Una said, tilting her head at Uru.

Uru smiled at Ruwen, and he bowed. “Goddess, thank you for seeing me.”

“Everyone sit,” Uru said. “I have an idea why our youngest Champion is here, and it involves all of us.”

Kaylin and Mica took up seats on either side of Uru and Ruwen sat next to Una across from them.

“First, an immense thank you,” Ruwen said. “For all you did and the information you provided our mutual friend. It likely saved my life.”

“My pleasure,” Uru responded.

“There is so much to discuss,” Ruwen said. “I don’t know where to begin.”

Uru leaned forward. “I do. Did you plan it with Miranda ahead of time?”

That confused Ruwen. “Plan? Plan what?”

“I thought so,” Uru said, leaning back. “Such a clever woman. I admire her ability to twist every situation to her benefit.”

“What did she do?”

Uru smiled. “I’ve not heard from most of my Brothers and Sisters for thousands of years, and in the last half-hour, over ten have sent messages to me, hoping I still lived.”

Ruwen furrowed his brow. “Why?”

“I’m only guessing, but I think Miranda has regretted making the Pact for at least nine thousand years. Less than an hour ago, she used your battle to somehow dissolve the Pact entirely. Then she gave the deities thirty-six hours to decide.”

“Decide what?”

“To follow Naktos and his circle, who plan to destroy you, or join her in supporting you.”

Comments

When Uru says brothers and sisters, is she just refering to the other Gods as her brothers and sisters, or did she mean her actual biological family members? It's possible she was from a larger family, we know her twin brother is one of the other gods. So maybe she was from a Cultivator family that tended to have a high amount of meridians and many of them became gods too?

Pannath

Amazing start, love where this is going. Really want to see how classes are made but I expect that will take time ruwen has so much about being a deity that right now it's very much a black box right now.

Nick Pincus

I think Lalquinrial was probably too distracted by Nameless to go back and get the other rings. That's speculation though. Very good point on considering the "other side" when developing a strategy to harvest the energy in the rings. Ruwen would probably want to just collect the rings for now until he can figure out a safe way to extract the energy. At the very least, acquiring the rings would impede movement of the Infernal folks.

Asheron Wilder

They would want to be careful with those crossing rings cause if they destroy one and Lalquinrial isnt able to stop it the other side they could destroy another planet by accident. OHH what if they got linked pairs there were 4 in storage, unless Lalquinrial took them when he left the Black Pyramid Vaults, then they could have double the chance of leveling the soul and hopefully no collateral damage!!

Jake Schmitt

They will if they find out about it. That's one of the main reasons why leveling souls hasn't been discussed much by those aware of it (it's fairly recent knowledge, too). In Chapter 44 of Book 8, Miranda mentioned “This knowledge could turn everything upside down. Many of Pen’s disciples are ruthlessly selfish. If they discover the process, they won’t hesitate to slaughter millions of people to level their souls.” When things settle down a bit (if they do; they probably won't), Ruwen should go look for more of those rings. Should be some on Nymthus's world, I imagine.

Asheron Wilder

I can see each of the deities getting to a different level of soul that might be needed for the future

Samuel Strode

Definitely, creepy uncle Nok.. did use one of the portals to get into the vaults who is to say any of the soul energy portals etc are left though… pact is broken the distraction can be removed now…

Samuel Strode

If I recall correctly from earlier text, souls can be leveled around 8 times. The resultant "shape" of the soul corresponds to the geometric shapes along one side of the Dark Temple. They have a great deal of soul energy stored in the other rings that Ruwen acquired, so that would be a good source if they decided to level. They probably would want to figure out a less explosive means of releasing the energy though, much like the conversion of terium to spirit. I did not anticipate the Shelly soul-leveling story line, so it will be interesting where that leads. Given her abilities, she could play an integral role in the final outcome. I can see Miranda wanting to experiment with soul-leveling as well (along with the other forms of energy Pen postulated).

Asheron Wilder

lol...I hope Ruwen tells him before he tries to fly, else he'll end up augering into the nearest cliff face.

Asheron Wilder

Fear, or he may just be acting at the behest of Izac, whom he visited immediately prior to the meeting with Miranda. It is odd that Naktos would show that sort of initiative on his own though. Also, I'm curious how effective he would be as a leader given he just admitted his cowardice. It doesn't inspire much confidence in others when you start the conversation with "please follow me, although you know I'll run at the first sign of serious danger." That makes me think he may be acting on Izac's behalf. Pure speculation on my part though.

Asheron Wilder

It makes sense for rami not to be their she does have her own interests. Of course sift woke up to chocolate cake! Souls can be advanced? With massive amounts of energy? It makes one wonder in Starfield will try. I am really looking forward to what happens next!

Samuel Strode

Fear. Ruwen killed two gods who simply declared war on Uru. What is he going to do to the god that banished him to the shadow realm?

Bob of Doom

Wow! I didn't expect Miranda to back Ruwen like that. She seems more like the type to see if this will all fall to peices first with another plan or 2 at the ready. I guess she does but that's not Ash's job. It's nice to see Sift powering up in his own way hope a level 3 soul doesn't make him have to relearn how to fly haha! Great chapters this week I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more!

Jake Schmitt

Wasn’t sure if you’d mean to have change the previous chapter on this end already, but just wanted to make sure you knew that my chapter 2 still has Rami with Ruwen!

Reed M

It’s not known how he gained is deity so it’s not wrong for them to still treat him as the youngest. What I want know is why Naktos wOuld lead the fight against Ruwen? That’s more of an Issac thing and Naktos seems like a person who would go back to biding his time. In the end of the prologue it didn’t say anything about a pending war or backing Ruwen, I thought she just ended the pack and told them to empty their storage rings in 48 hours. Anyways, great work as always. These chapters make my day.

Andrew Cutler

Everyone keeps having the idea that Ruwen is "The Youngest" and 17 years old, etc. That's actually not true anymore. He used at least 100 years during his transition to Divine. He actually existed during that time (or a version of him did) - so he may be "youngest" because others have lived for hundreds of years, but he, too, has lived at least a couple hundred years already.

Joe

Yeah, I thought so too. Then I remembered that Ruwen couldn't enter Miranda's realm the second time without her permission. Maybe the dieties have ways of stopping others from entering their reams without permission.

Joe

I thought about this but didn't think anyone would have the gate runes for it. But I probably need to be a little more specific on how she is getting contacted. Great point!

A. F. Kay

This is probably a silly question, but can't the deities just check to see if Uru's divine realm is still present? It's continued existence would be a dead giveaway (pun intended) that she's alive.

Asheron Wilder


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