Divine Apostasy Book 8 - Chapter 47
Added 2023-06-03 06:26:24 +0000 UTCThis book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.
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AFK
Comments
Excellent point Nick! I think you are right that I didn't dwell on it enough. Do you think this is fixable in your opinion with a couple paragraphs contemplating the immenseness of the fix? Or is it just too sudden all together. Thanks again for the feedback!
A. F. Kay
2023-06-10 18:12:09 +0000 UTCThis felt both too easy, and too underappreciated as a change. Ruwen's inability to use spirit had been a big feature for a while now; it massively impacted several fights and pretty much directly led to all those dead students. Now he's quickly fully healed (which feels a bit deus ex machina) and there doesn't seem to be the big emotional moment I would have expected from him getting his combat ability back.
Nick O'Roonling
2023-06-10 09:19:12 +0000 UTCThat’s right I forgot about his massive regen
Samuel Strode
2023-06-03 06:55:43 +0000 UTC
