Divine Apostasy Book 8 - Chapter 10
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Comments
Excellent point! Thank you!
A. F. Kay
2023-04-15 07:12:10 +0000 UTCAlso... Ruwen rose in the air as a black horse appeared under him. He didn’t rise in the air because he is under water. Perhaps this should say he rose from the bottom of the lake as a black horse appeared under him instead. Unless I don’t understand, is there a bubble of air down on the bottom of the lake with that air spell thing he has?
gideon ferrier
2023-03-26 01:23:50 +0000 UTC“Vex disappeared immediately and Ruwen floated to the lake bottom.” Shouldn’t the term here be he sunk to the bottom instead of he floated to the lake bottom? Also does he sink so easily in water because he has a diamond body? Most people naturally begin to rise in the water.
gideon ferrier
2023-03-26 01:21:08 +0000 UTCExactly right. But perhaps I should reconsider that term considering the circumstances I can see how it is confusing.
A. F. Kay
2023-03-19 15:21:16 +0000 UTCBurnt = cool / awesome
Sydrenerose
2023-03-19 01:12:33 +0000 UTCNot sure if this is a typo or I'm not remembeing a term here, but i don't know what "It looked so burnt to ride a horse across the water..." is trying to say
Nick O'Roonling
2023-03-18 09:23:51 +0000 UTCNothing but bad choices. Poor Ruwen.
A. F. Kay
2023-03-14 21:38:27 +0000 UTCThat would free up power for Lir to act. hmmm . . .
Joe
2023-03-11 19:05:07 +0000 UTCAll children placed in queue what's next lol
Dustin Sago
2023-03-11 10:51:52 +0000 UTC
