HLP - Chapter 33
Added 2022-12-30 05:08:23 +0000 UTCThis book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book to be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.
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AFK
Comments
You’re right. I had that on my list of fixes, but I forgot about it. I love writing dialog where characters interrupt each other, too. So there are probably a bunch of these I need to fix.
BRB
2022-12-31 06:17:42 +0000 UTC"We had help," said Hamma. "We met some guys in a tavern down in Monster City-". — I know Hamma is distraught but she hates being interrupted
Samuel Strode
2022-12-31 04:43:56 +0000 UTCBoth my a lylan are shades I know my has said snap my dagger a few times to express concern or to make a statement Lylan uses two daggers and a crossbow so it would not be unheard of for her to pick up that phrase from Ky but I don’t see her using that statement in AF Kay’s books it feels like this chapter or the next could use “snap my dagger”
Samuel Strode
2022-12-30 06:54:15 +0000 UTC
