Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 94
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Comments
I will look at that. Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
A. F. Kay
2022-06-04 06:15:03 +0000 UTCI will revisit this a little in the third draft. But without saying too much, yes, that is what I am going for. This obviously has drawbacks and Ruwen will need to grow and evolve as the series continues.
A. F. Kay
2022-06-04 06:13:57 +0000 UTCThank you sooooo much!!!!
A. F. Kay
2022-06-04 06:11:02 +0000 UTCThank you!!!!!!
A. F. Kay
2022-06-04 06:10:28 +0000 UTCWhen Ruwen attacked the last two aspects you have "as they collapsed the ground" instead collapsed to the ground might be more appropriate depending on what you were looking for their. Also that you so much for the chapter I expecially loved how Ruwen monologued before the end about how much of a mistake that they made trying to face him. 😁
brennon Petersen
2022-05-28 14:10:17 +0000 UTCWhat’s the logic for leaving the aspects around? Something like mercy for those weaker?
Gaurav Hosur
2022-05-28 14:08:39 +0000 UTCYou have a Draught that should be Drought there
Jeremiah Halstead
2022-05-28 08:50:34 +0000 UTCPoison with two feet to abdomen. To his abdomen
Samuel Strode
2022-05-28 05:38:23 +0000 UTC
