Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 82
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I was actually thinking that same thing since book five actually. How she had purposefully put him in danger trying to get him to use the blood oath, but that should've triggered the clan oath...
Unbreak
2022-06-20 17:34:13 +0000 UTCI covered this a little in a comment above. This is great feedback and I think I will add a little uncertainty (via dialogue with Ruwen) for the Addas on what Ruwen might choose to do. I will work to make this believable and properly motivated. Even a reference to not showing up so he cant get in trouble is a decent motivation.
A. F. Kay
2022-05-14 06:27:33 +0000 UTCI appreciate the feedback. I think in addition to Echo providing a little dialogue detailing how she will be fine, I'm going to add a little bit of uncertainty from Ruwen on what he plans to do. That is, he has a real desire to fix the situation in Deepwell, and at least considers doing that. I will work on this in the next revision to make the actions more believable. Thanks!
A. F. Kay
2022-05-14 06:25:16 +0000 UTCI think the issue there is Sifts parents know what Ruwen is capable of, and if they're required to inform the clan, than the clan would know as well. So it's not quite believeable to think he just vanished without a trace without someone taking an active hand in him vanishing
S Money
2022-05-11 19:16:38 +0000 UTC@joe that requires some suspension of belief. Like it doesn't actually require you to believe it, only to be told you won't be harmed.
S Money
2022-05-11 19:14:42 +0000 UTCThe questions around Echo are good feedback. I will make a note to add one or two pieces of dialogue to make this clearer. My intent is that she can tell the addas the truth...Ruwen was in the kitchen and then he disappeared. Book four showed us how cut-throat the trials are, and the Clan would not shed any tears for a candidate who couldn't even make it to the start. Absolutely all the addas will be suspicious, but I feel like Echo's behavior walks the fine line between all her oaths. Great feedback! Thank you everyone!
A. F. Kay
2022-05-07 06:49:01 +0000 UTCHaha, yes. That has been in my head for almost a year. So glad to get that out.
A. F. Kay
2022-05-07 06:42:21 +0000 UTCYou all suffer enough every week. It was just too painful a cliffhanger. Haha.
A. F. Kay
2022-05-07 06:41:33 +0000 UTCI mean, madda and padda wanted ruwen to do the master trial. Isn't echo preventing him from going and essentially interfering with bamboo viper business. Last thing they knew was they told ruwen to follow, and then only echo is there. They will obviously know that echo interfered.
Dylan
2022-05-07 05:52:58 +0000 UTCShe is in the same clan as Madda and Padda - The clan forbids killing each other. Also, she didn't kill Ruwen - She just sent him "home." Whatever happens while he is there can be layed at other people's feet, not hers. She has deniability. In fact, if she didn't, her oath to assist Ruwen would have prevented her from doing what she did. That's why she had to be convinced that her father would only question Ruwen, not kill or harm him.
Joe
2022-05-07 05:49:03 +0000 UTCI don't understand why echo isn't worried about consequences when matta and patta find out about what she did.
Dylan
2022-05-07 02:21:39 +0000 UTCVery succinct! And accurate! Lol.
Joe
2022-04-30 14:43:55 +0000 UTCLOL. So true. I would have been pulling my non-existent hair out too! But I would have completely understood why he would. In fact, I was more surprised that he didn't.
Joe
2022-04-30 14:42:33 +0000 UTCHoly Shit!!
Lena M. Lucente
2022-04-30 12:05:03 +0000 UTCI would have rioted if you had left us here this week
Jeremiah Halstead
2022-04-30 08:24:37 +0000 UTC
