Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 24
Added 2021-12-11 10:35:40 +0000 UTCThis book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.
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Comments
Thank you for the feedback!
A. F. Kay
2021-12-24 04:46:29 +0000 UTC"Ruwen and Overlord had experimented and figured out Overlord, if Ruwen allowed it, could access the Spirit in Ruwen’s Core." The wording here feels a bit off. I would suggest either going with "figured out that Overlord" or "discovered [that] Overlord", as well as moving "could" to that end of the comma break. i.e. "Overlord could, if Ruwen allowed it, access the Spirit in Ruwen's core."
Daemon Shade
2021-12-21 11:09:14 +0000 UTC
