Divine Apostasy Book 4 - Chapter 13
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Comments
Im new to this, and i apologize if im wrong, but i remember him borrowing the rings that added to his energy regen and that he would have to give them back. A few chapters ago he returned the 6 boxes but not the rings. and i dont believe it was mentioned. (I mention it now because the regen numbers appear here)
Max Andresen
2020-10-26 10:20:44 +0000 UTCThank you so much!
A. F. Kay
2020-09-12 22:50:17 +0000 UTCWas good to see him take time out to actually prepare himself and get to the right build for what he needs. I agree that it was a bit repetitive in places though. 2 typos I saw: * In the worker spells, you have "minon" instead if "minion". * "The points he'd placed in Worker abilities and spells were permenant" should be "permanent" One thing I didnt understand was why Ruwen took 11 points from Dexterity and then immediately added one back in. Was it because he didn't know that removing 11 made it go down 14 due to the modifiers? If so maybe consider making that a bit clearer?
Nick O'Roonling
2020-09-12 08:50:46 +0000 UTCYeah, he has so much to do.
A. F. Kay
2020-09-06 03:31:15 +0000 UTCI keep waiting for him to draw (or ask Shelly to create permanently...) a rune door to the pyramid so that he can have time to do all the things that he needs to do.
Joe Long
2020-09-05 21:59:59 +0000 UTCThat is a great observation. I wrote this chapter split over a few days and I probably reiterated more than I should have. I'll clean this up. Thanks!
A. F. Kay
2020-09-05 18:09:24 +0000 UTCI enjoyed some of it but I think this chapter needs revisiting. Too many repetitions. If it was intentional as Ruwens ramblings, then Im sorry, but it got a bit annoying at the middle when same self-questions get asked in two diferent paragraphs. Also, "Thirteen buffs lined the top of Ruwen’s vision, and he opened his Profile to see their effect (on) his stats.
Lonez Zhavec
2020-09-05 11:53:43 +0000 UTC
