NokiMo
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Art Feedback!

Hey folks! Once again thanks so much for supporting me, I was wondering how you folks think I can improve or add to my art to make it better!

Comments

Try different lining and shading techniques, don't be afraid to experiment with stuff off the books. Maybe some thinner or thicker linings and such. Just keep at it and see what works and what doesn't.

TypicallyAtypical

Maybe more of intentional gaining because she's into being fatter. Or maybe she gets fatter so she can be more dominant/she can hold someone down easier. I am also a huge fan of fatties destroying stuff with their weight, either furniture collapsing/buckling from them sitting or leaving cracks in the floor with each step/miniature earthquakes with each step, also clothes that are soaked in sweat so you can see through them, like a wet white T-shirt but sweat instead of water. These are all things I'm pretty sure you've done before though so... keep up the good work. :)

Jack Melden

I think you should delve a little more into the forced/captive feedee stuff more You've done it before, and even some of the health stuff would be good. Your style and way you draw extremely fat bodies really looks amazing.

ppsh russian

Honestly, your art is great and there's no real improvements I know muscles is not your thing but there is strong fat if you ever try to incorporated it into anything at all but your art is just great overall

Bigger is better

Perhaps in a image with implied gas green cloud around the area the gas comes out, and thickness shading depending on how big or airy is it, Your art is honestly so good that things like i mentioned don’t even bother me not being there anyways, keep up the good stuff

NationalBlueBird196


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