Suggestions! Change the cloak/mages robe to either a dark shade of deep green that's almost black, some other dark color that is almost black or black. With the multi-colored flames coming off and around his body the contrast of the dark color against the multi-colors will stand out even more. Making, I think, the picture even cooler looking. That and because wasn't his cloak/mages robe was supposed to be dark colored? Because, wasn't it supposed to have come from an order of knights, or something like that, that created them to enable themselves to travel through the shadows only at night for far distances super fast in a short period of time? I can't remember what color the cloak/mages robe was exactly but I'm pretty sure I remember it was described as, at least, a dark colored cloak/mages robe. Oooo, and maybe put the phoenix above and behind his head. That's where it seems like it usually is at when he uses it in the story. Flying around and above him. And maybe put the soul star in his hand where the ball of flame is. That whole thing would look so cool! That is, if this picture isn't a snap shot picture of a future scene in the book. And even if it is, I still think my suggestions would make a really cool looking picture to make, just because!!!
Nicole Hicks
2025-10-09 18:01:09 +0000 UTC
I like the attention to detail, with regards to the different types of fire around the head of his staff.