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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 9 Chapter 357/ 2: Team Practice

Hey Guys,

Here is another chapter for you. This took me a bit longer than I was expecting. Let me know what you think. I would love feedback. Constructive Criticism is always welcome :D

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIPl6w2sZu-VnpC-0BsZKunSNImTyUifxmQTh9QVRSw/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Love the thought of Angela placing a hierarchy in Alex’s home. Alex above her own parents while Angela dominates them all. I would love to see it, amazing chapter! ❤️

Vendetta913

Solid chapter, moved the plot a lot forward. Looking forward for the house debuchery. But still cant forget the computer nerd that seemed like bad news. Liked the pacing, some sentences are weird when speaking out loud (i read often storys out loud so wife can hear when wify is otherwise busy) As an adult i cringed so hard with sarah, not that it is bad it reminded me of school times when an ex tries to make me jelous so annoying. Funny cult talk and shower scene with the team was not bad (kinda understand why the girl asked) but good that she interacts more with the team and what is better to improve team work when the whole team shares a giant hard cock. And as a german home owner weird that you need to close your door with a key and can leave a door just open.

SirCoffee


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