Galaxy Hunter Online Chapter 136: Target
Added 2025-02-13 10:09:40 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
Sorry for the slow chapters. Until I get a new laptop or my old one comes back, I am struggling to write on these shit keyboards.
I really, really want to write more, but frustration is writer's block all on its own.
Anyway, I would love feedback for this chapter because I am not sure about it. Not in what happens in it but in how it is written. I hope you enjoy it!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jEGR9-Ge8_4cbqDXxz_dI3ijKNRPHiv9Svf4GLI-HwA/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
No worries with how this was written. Flows well through each "scene" driver conversation was nice felt real I could see that being an actual conversation in a taxi. If anything felt short but again when your reading a decent novel that's released chapter by chapter that's a common feeling.
Evernigh
2025-02-13 12:11:28 +0000 UTC
