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AoaHW Book 2 Chapter 4

Hey Guys,

So, I am very serious here; I would absolutely LOVE, no, NEED feedback for the last part of this chapter. It is something that I have not really done before, and I need to hear how people think it works. this will assist me in the future for when I make scenes like this in the future. It is one of the reasons I do Short stories. So I can practice certain types of scenes before trying them in the main story.

Anyways, I hope you enjoy~!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HCKcimqlGAt8KlA0P98hIyA3rt-fN3i0kx_TzuuTsy8/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Good chapter

Shamim

I like it

ReclamerS117


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