Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 8 Chapter 338/ 24: Late Morning
Added 2025-01-19 11:25:00 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
Honestly, this chapter took me much longer than it should have. I would love if I could get some feedback. I hope you enjoy~!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d7qXV8hNL3m4Jsx6X8KMUKfJrFt2hY24hvCo6iNninE/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Solid chapter, felt a little quick, but that's alright to get past a block, could also look into revisiting a few of the threads you left loose to help, seemed like there was more of a back story to Nelson to explore, now that Angela can be using her own home rather than the teachers locker room, could also move her lunches with the girls there, also tie off with the criminal lawyer, and finally have Angela get a hold of her finances, and perhaps a few gifts for her girls and some things for her house as a result of that
Corso Hawkins
2025-01-19 17:31:35 +0000 UTCGood chapter. Excited what will happen with Sarah in the future. And to the lawyer stuff, what happened to the hole one sister of a student leaked police stuff and they got infront of the principal?
SirCoffee
2025-01-19 15:03:37 +0000 UTCSolid chapter, I definitely think you should throw a chapter of Daniel and Jake in there and Daniel helping Jake to just be a bimbo cock slut that gives everything to Angela like Kylar did and just be a piece of furniture for her but it’s all Daniel’s training that he’s doing to be her Graduation gift from him
jdhawks94
2025-01-19 14:19:38 +0000 UTCI'm not really sure what happened, but my editing software cut out a section of my previous paragraph and then copied it over in an odd way. Not really fucking sure why. but thanks for pointing it out :D
Madjic
2025-01-19 13:38:27 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. I'm not sure if I'm reading this section wrong or you couldn't decide which to pic as the final but I personally like the second more. "Because you have been around me for a couple of years now and gauge my personality." despite excelling in each and every class. I thought you were not so," He paused and thought about it, "Forthright, You just say what is on your mind and screw the consequences. "Not really, you changed this year from the quiet girl trying not to get noticed despite excelling in each and every class. I thought you were not so," He paused and thought about it, "Forthright, You just say what is on your mind and screw the consequences."
ReclamerS117
2025-01-19 13:30:08 +0000 UTC
