Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 8 Chapter 318/ 04: Shooter Jane
Added 2024-11-01 12:31:05 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
I will be locking down the last of Week 7, behind 15$ tier and above, in the next 5 days. So read it while you can.
I also would love to hear what people think of my work.
Enjoy the Chapter!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cSfrnpA39Ha8WM9i58jZZ1umagHZ_5mXq0oE2lBPop0/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
What i love about Life of a dominant is you have a nice balance of smut and sweetness and drama. Good Characters that are there for smut and relationship and there is the other site good ones where they are very good for smut ( Alex Parents as an example) The Ok stuff: The first point is good but to much (for me), to many open storie lines. You have Angelas Parents and Sister that are more than one line, the guy that attacked her, the other guy his friend that insulter her, the lost bet guy (didnt like that who takes a bet that changes your life taking hormones etc), kylie (love her, hope she goes more to woman even one day with hormones, the twins, the ceo woman, volleyball, jack, strawberry family, the asshole from the gym, her mma carrier, the bet with the guy who cums first (was weird because her pussy is the same as alex) i bet there are mor line and i find is a little bit to much. The bad: To much rage fuckin for me (not my kink so meh) and the Sadism that has nothing to do with sex. Like being happy that a girl has a broken nose after the ball hit her in the face. For someone that got bullied and is trained by her sensai und sees him like a father and then go so against his philosophy didnt like it at all.
SirCoffee
2024-11-03 11:55:07 +0000 UTC
