Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 7 Chapter 280/ 30: Annoucment
Added 2024-07-10 08:56:24 +0000 UTCHey guys,
Not long ago, I posted the chapter number above. please Disregard this chapter. I posted it liked it. Then hated it. Like I REALLY hated it. I have deleted the chapter, and I plan on rewriting it. I did not like how the chapter worked with everyone's personality, and I felt it was all mixed up and fucked up. I am sorry; I do not like posting something and then deleting it. But the chapter is not right in my mind. I hate it and so it will no longer be Cannon, and I will be reworking it. I think I will wait until tomorrow or later before attempting again.
Sorry for any Confusion.
Madjic
Comments
To be honest, I usually like what I put out. With the speed at which I am bringing things out, it is a pretty good track record. But, even with this, after rereading it, I figured out what I hated and reuploaded it. The chapter is not much different; it was just a bad interaction scene where I fucked up how a character was supposed to react for some reason, even I do not understand.
Madjic
2024-07-10 12:22:29 +0000 UTCThis is what was the fucking issue I was having. There was an obvious plot hole in the chapter, too, which no one picked up on. I at least noticed it, but besides the point, I was heavily annoyed with how Angela talked and acted. It did not make sense in the world that Angela had already talked to her Gym Bros. This relationship was not correct and not how she would have behaved. It took me too many rereads to understand this. I did overreact on the deletion. It just needed editing.
Madjic
2024-07-10 12:17:52 +0000 UTCIt has been modified and re-uploaded. Please check out the updated version.
Madjic
2024-07-10 12:15:24 +0000 UTCConsidering how many chapters you’ve been sending in a short amount of time, it’s understandable that there’s been something that you sent out which you didn’t like upon rereading. Rather I’m surprised it’s only just happened.
Mr.Tiemos
2024-07-10 12:14:51 +0000 UTCMy only issue with it was how much Angela was acting like a frat-bro in front of Trevor and Trimmers
Justin "Johnist" Johanson
2024-07-10 09:19:59 +0000 UTCI haven't read anything yet so I can't say. I am keeping them all until September 6. Don't push yourself too much and take breaks
Shamim
2024-07-10 09:12:08 +0000 UTCPlease keep the chapter...it's good...fits with the story.
Patrick G
2024-07-10 09:00:09 +0000 UTCI just read it. It was good. My first thought after reading it is that Angela is finally having some fun and she's going to rip scout guy's fighter's head off. 😁
Patrick G
2024-07-10 08:58:57 +0000 UTCIt's alright majic, take your time you are already well ahead of your schedule and have been spoiling us ALOT :)
Havocado
2024-07-10 08:58:06 +0000 UTC
