Galaxy Hunter Online Chapter 75: Stress Reduction
Added 2024-03-02 12:21:12 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
So I have been working on this chapter for a bit and I wanted to release a double chapter. I really want to hear feedback as this is the first time I did a chapter like this, more or less. I would love to hear what you think and hear any constructive criticism.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NfWksu43hV7bqAmDgy9dg06lyBn8UR4uqdlBDsZO34Y/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
It was incredibly hot! Amazing scene
epoeck
2024-11-15 17:52:46 +0000 UTCAbsolutely amazing, I really truly loved everything even the queen name is brilliant 👏
Shamim
2024-06-04 16:16:56 +0000 UTCVery vivid and great. Maybe could have added a bit of the reactions of Queen more as she was being pleased.
Da Boss
2024-04-05 05:47:57 +0000 UTCLoved every word of it all and was done amazingly well
Da Boss
2024-04-05 05:47:13 +0000 UTCAbsolutely loved the scene. Very well done👍
ReclamerS117
2024-03-03 07:28:14 +0000 UTCHey guys, I would REALLY love some Feedback on the scene in this chapter. It is different from what I usually do and I would love some comments on how you thought of the scene. It helps me for writing other scenes in the future if I should adopt this style for a scene or when I am making side chapters or story lines. Thanks!
Madjic
2024-03-03 07:08:31 +0000 UTC
