Galaxy Hunter Online Chapter 51 Has been EDITED
Added 2023-08-22 12:43:45 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
So I decided, after some careful thought to edit the 51st chapter. There is about a page and a quarter more writing. It is a little bit of a recap. I am sorry for any confusion. I will post the book on Amazon soon, but I have been a little lazy getting around to it.
Anyways, here is the link, so you don't have to find the link. I hope you enjoy the Minor edit.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EEKyWiGktM4qhud0rDvHimpvCbZ3PymsASWc9L9wjwo/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
I like the story the only issue I have with this in all is pretty minor. It's how sleepywonder keeps switching back and forth between actually playing out the role in game and then treating her companions as nothing but poorly programed npcs. Like it seriously keeps switching every time she goes in and out of the game pretty frequently. Kind of aggrevating to read because you get into the immersion of her actually playing the role she chose then the next chapter in or next time she's in game she does a complete 180.
Evan Cloud
2023-08-24 11:51:57 +0000 UTC
