Madjic

Dominatrix System Rewrite Chapter 1: Bleeding Out

Added 2021-09-28 03:41:47 +0000 UTC

Hey Guys,

So, I have been stating this for not that long, but I want to make the ages for Dominatrix System more appropriate. I also know that with the way I have it Currently written that I cannot do that. Too much in the Earlier chapters makes it almost impossible. I will not be rewriting the entire book and plan just to change the First Arc of the book.

SO! Saying that the current chapters are still going to be right in the rewrite. I will be fixing to make ages, and honestly. Fixing up things on the System that I no longer want to include into the story that when I first started, I imagined doing it.

The reason for that change was gradual, and I didn't want to make the System completely broken. Imagine that! As a reader as well as the writer, I don't like making my characters broken and OP. I want them to bleed, and I want you to feel a thrill when they overcome a challenge.

That all being said, I would like to test out the links with Patreon on the rewrite of my First chapter of Dominatrix System that I will be putting out to the public later, but for now, you guys get to enjoy on your own.

Let me know what you think of it, and I will get my fingers back to work creating new Content.

P.S. This is open to anyone pressing the link at the moment since I don't want to restrict it yet but that will change in the future when I get around to making time for it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U5DBOWn_3FE0w7aDbq8_7xVP1O-7bc4LcQ1IlfMGUH4/edit?usp=sharing