Trap online Announcement.
Added 2021-03-29 10:09:06 +0000 UTCHey guys,
First of all if you haven't read the recent chapter of trap Online... Don't read this post. If you're not reading trap online, Then okay read this post.
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I am torn to announce that Trap online has finished its rework. The part that I changed into a side story has been reincorporated into the story. This was the original intention of the book and after a week when I announced the rework. I took some time and I realized I love that part as well and wanted it in the main story. I like the part and everyone was interested in it that commented to me.
So for many reasons I have reincorporated it into the story. It is part of the story. The previous became something of a spoiler that I feel really bad about.
Thanks for the support and I am sorry I made a spoiler.
Now for something more uplifting. I feel that Trap online definitely deserves a side story. Please give me a suggestion and I will pick something to create. Thanks!
Comments
I know you like Iona but I hope you would do one for Bloom and Fidel because I can see their former lives being both interesting, possibly traumatic and fun.
Grangel
2021-03-30 17:24:41 +0000 UTCYes, some are boring from the Kink point of view.. but is all you write kink? these may just be stories to help define or explain his character and why he does things the way he does them...just a thought...
Grangel
2021-03-29 14:36:05 +0000 UTChmm... 3 would be another story altogether instead of a side story 1 and 2 this same as the previous comment. 4 is something I am already contemplating and plan to do more with otherwise they are useless 5 I would personally feel are boring from a kink perspective since Rick was almost asexual and would be VERY hard to write since I can't understand that mindset 6 I like that idea and will probably implement at least 1 for Iona since I really like her. 7 I am not sure about. I really have to say I like the thoughts and appreciate the ideas. I have been very blank on ideas for Trap online side stories and this will help me immensely. I guess I am to close to the stories to think objectively on it sometimes.
Madjic
2021-03-29 14:24:58 +0000 UTCI was editing when you read it, please review again... I know you wanted to do some short stories with defined endings so these are my thoughts
Grangel
2021-03-29 14:17:38 +0000 UTCI'm not going to lie I didn't think about that. I do have some things but that is an interesting side story I like both ideas. I do have a general idea of what the daughter is doing in my head but that is an interesting idea. The downstairs people would make an interesting one in the future but that isn't set up at this point. I really like the ideas thanks
Madjic
2021-03-29 14:15:26 +0000 UTCSide stories: 1. Something about his daughters on-line adventures (but since she loves Daddy I don't think anything sexual would be right since she wants daddy, which since they are not biological is all good). I have to admit I have been wondering what she has been doing all this time online and off. 2. Something concerning the lab guys/girls from Viccy's company working down stairs (could be on-line or offline or both). 3. An NPC that becomes "sentient" and his/her adventures. 4. I don't know if you are going to tie them into the his story in any interesting way (besides cooking and exercising, does anybody come in and clean, maid service?) but there is always something about the other residents of his apartment. 5. Stories from his younger days , Viccy's younger days (this can include childhood all the way up till our Trap starts), now these might be good short stories to work on, with defined endings. 6. Life of any of his NPC party members before meeting him (Good short story topic). 7. Viccy's adventures before she joined his party (another good short story topic). 8. All the above as a collection of short stories.
Grangel
2021-03-29 14:05:42 +0000 UTC
