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Summary Revisions and Character Descriptions

Redid the summary to include a world explanation and make the croaking secret, will be mostly keeping them from scra's perspective since we know more about him until like season 3 where it can start to be more about ky:


The only habitable island remaining in the world houses the remnants of a civilization of Avians – humans with bird wings – strictly governed by a hierarchical system based on species. Eagles reside at the very top with high-ranking positions of power, with Corvids – specifically Crows – at the bottom. This is the way things are, and always will be.

Scra, a Crow, never imagined that he would be at the lowest point in his life when he made his first friend. Wing clipped and initiated into a Murder he’d spent his life trying to avoid, a boy with Osprey wings and no business taking interest in a Crow drops in on him – and then refuses to leave. Night after night throughout the summer the two talk, building a friendship on a lonely cliff top. Until Scra disappears, that is.

Ky isn’t sure what he did to cause the Crow boy to stand him up, but he sure did regret not asking him his name beforehand. He also didn’t expect to have the opportunity to find it out quite so soon, as his new roommate at the military academy he’s attending looks awfully familiar.

Life at The Roost isn’t all flight tests and combat training, however, and Scra soon realizes that he’ll need some allies if he’s to balance his two lives in this manufactured utopia, and uncover the truth about the dark whispers of a secret – “The Croaking” – that are seeping from the cracks.



Also have some character descriptions: 


Ky:

A second-year transfer to The Roost, Ky is a good-natured Osprey who has a penchant for diving and absolutely no weapons skills whatsoever. A country boy at heart, he’d much rather be relaxing by the ocean than in the arid canyon, but it seems like something’s brought him to the Academy – something he’d rather keep secret.

Scra:

The Roost’s first ever Crow student, Scra’s acceptance is shrouded in mystery and no one’s quite sure who his allegiance is to. Orphaned at a young age, he’s no stranger to the City streets and the dangers that lurk in the shadows – and has the knife skills to prove it. Distrusting and straightforward with a particular distaste for his own kind, Scra wouldn’t hesitate to take action against them to gain a better lot in life –  a trait those in power have taken notice of.

Ree:

Top of the class, a crack shot with an attitude to boot, Ree may be a small Kestrel but she’s not one to be messed with. Fearless and loyal, she won’t stop until she’s uncovered the answers to any mystery – sometimes at the expense of other people’s patience.



If y'all could lmk if you think they work or if you would change anything that would be super helpful, I hate writing summaries haha. Keep in mind the first volume's just up until ep 25 where Ky rips scra's feathers out so don't want to be spoiling any of the future books in it. 

Comments

Yeah, now it's perfect! Well done!

AlterPhoenix

Of I hadn't already been sent to read this by title alone, of have gone looking for it for sure after this. Character descriptions are neat and tight and you absolutely get a sense of our MCs 👏👏

Erin Ronald

I like that's it's short and concise,gets the cool feel across without giving too much away

Tristan Benjamin Atkinson

I quite liked it. I feel like it's just enough to get the gist of what this story is about, and I like the character descriptions. At times, I wish other works had those.

Beew Im

times were simpler then lol

Megan

Soooo gooooood! It makes me want to go back and reread the whole series!

Lo

I got chills reading that description, it's great! Also, SEASON 3 CONFIRMED WOOT WOOT!

Tobias Gehlen


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