My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 45, Page 21
Added 2025-02-05 12:21:07 +0000 UTC
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Thanks! I've changed it.
SimVenus Arts
2025-02-11 09:29:17 +0000 UTCIs it me, or does Amanda see you be enjoying herself from the look on her face she seems quite happy in the situation she is in.
Robmur
2025-02-07 01:11:46 +0000 UTCSimVenus, the followng is a suggestion only, it is not a correction.. Gabby's thought after Amanda comes: "She's come" - to me this sounds better "She came" The word 'She's' is normally a contraction for 'She is'. Here, you are using 'She's' to mean 'She has', denoting past tense. 'She came' is simpler to me, because came is the past tense of come. Guys, what do you think? 🤔 Thoughts, conjectures? This may be just a personal preference for me. SimVenus, you choose. 😊
Larry_W
2025-02-05 18:47:11 +0000 UTC
