My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 38, Page 17
Added 2024-06-05 21:53:02 +0000 UTC
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Thanks! I've corrected them
SimVenus Arts
2024-06-06 21:36:00 +0000 UTCRobmur, you got that right. Emma shows narcissistic traits and thinks she is the goddess, the queen bee. Emma probably would not care if someone walked in but Gabby sure would, but, we know Emma doesn't think about Gabby's embarrassment at all. Remember on the previous page, Gabby was nude on the toilet, but she didn't relieve herself until the other two left. So, Gabby still has some prudish qualities. However, Emma seems to want to remove all of those qualities from Gabby. This is not how girlfriends behave, even in a BDSM relationship. Emma conditionally 'loves' Gabby. Gabby's love is unconditional. I hope Gabby realizes that some day,
Larry_W
2024-06-06 01:40:45 +0000 UTCMagieHeels, in case you did not notice I commented about what I found about the the two (yes, 2) contracts between Emma and Gabby. It's not much. I swear there was a list I remembered but I could not find it. Also, remember that Gabby only skimmed the contracts and only signed when she found out that she could cancel it at any time. If you believe she will, oh what is that old saying, oh yeah, I have some swamp land in Florida I can sell you. The issue with exploring is that Emma is all 'charge, full speed ahead!" and Gabby is more reserved. I think Gabby's approach is better. Emma could get them into a non-desirable situation. Emma should ask the 'waitress' what is behind the door before just barging in. Here Emma is showing her immaturity (again) by believing she knows all and is better than everyone (again). Emma needs to be taken down a peg or two.
Larry_W
2024-06-06 01:35:01 +0000 UTCSimVenus, one typo, Emma's second line, "I wonder why the came here." should be "I wonder why they came here." the word the should be they. Also, Gabby's last line: "This time it's me the one who doesn't reply." doesn't sound quite right. You could go with "This time I'm the one who does not reply.", but, maybe better, just simply "I don't reply."
Larry_W
2024-06-06 01:21:46 +0000 UTCBehind the wooden door is de-limbing chamber... :}
Maggie Heels
2024-06-05 23:11:32 +0000 UTCOk, I feel like I should be hearing the theme to Jaws about now or some type of eerie scary movie music. Perhaps the wizard of oz was right when he said. Pay no attention to that man behind the screen. Or in this case the door. Then again wouldn't Emma be upset if stranger came in when she was having fun with gabby. Me thinks Emma thinks only of herself. Perhaps😏
Robmur
2024-06-05 22:15:34 +0000 UTC
