Thanks Larry, I completely missed that. ( Hands Larry badge for honorary member of the Sentence Police) π
Robmur
2024-06-04 10:40:57 +0000 UTC
Thanks! I've corrected it.
SimVenus Arts
2024-06-04 07:49:12 +0000 UTC
Too bad that Emma is not into it. But I like her statement: "You are lucky I'm not into it", implying that if she was, Gabby would have no choice but to serve as her human toilet.
Steven
2024-06-04 05:23:01 +0000 UTC
SimVenus, first line, 'Emma: What happens?' should read 'Emma: What happened?'. It is past tense.
Great story by the way!