My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 33, Page 15
Added 2023-12-16 17:00:57 +0000 UTC
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Memes please! I love memes! I love both the story and the comments. As a possible future writer, I am really into character development. I think SimVenus has done a very good job with this story. And yes, I do have a tendency to nitpick a bit, ok maybe a lot, but this story, and possibly almost all the other stories I've read, makes me think of the characters and possible reasons for their behaviors. This story is great for this. It is well written and the graphics are great. I know that sometimes I need to take a chill pill and just relax and enjoy the story, and I do, sometimes. 😃 but, this story has gotten me back into writing and I'm very grateful for it. I am hoping SimVenus continues with possibly with a part 2 when this story is finished, maybe set a few years into the future. I would also like a background story on Patricia, and another on the previous owner (and builder?) Of the dungeon.
Larry_W
2023-12-17 11:30:08 +0000 UTCI sometimes struggle what is better... story itself or that over analyzing by million times in comments under... i really want to post a popcorn meme animated gif while i read comments here ;) this story is a fantasy in a fantasy world... trying constantly match it with real world is a "foul & miss" to me but this is only my subjective point of view so don't bother what am i saying and please continue if this bring you the joy you seek 😁
MaggieHeels
2023-12-16 22:41:57 +0000 UTCThe phrase in business is 'praise publicly, punish privately '. I agree with you on this. So, Patricia has some agenda she's following to do this. Also, this is not in Gabby's contract, which is with Emma, not Patricia. But, we don't know the exact contract wording, and I doubt that this is in the toy addendum. Hmmm.. I could see this being in a slave contract, not a sub contract.
Larry_W
2023-12-16 20:42:30 +0000 UTCWhy is Patricia punishing Gabby in front of her mother, what does she want to achieve by doing so? Couldn't she do it in private for each woman? Ok, Elena is her submissive but what about Gabby? Did she have this in her contract?
Wojtek
2023-12-16 18:45:37 +0000 UTC
