My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 32, Page 20
Added 2023-11-09 16:30:49 +0000 UTC
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Ok, had some trouble understanding this phrase the first read through "Emma stands up but I don't dare to do it so I stay on my knees." May I sugest something along this line. "... I don't dare to, so I stay on my knees" possibly with a comma or a period after "so" just my thoughts Venus. Glad Patricia is getting her 2 cents in.
Robmur
2023-11-10 01:44:17 +0000 UTCSuch great character development! Emma has all it takes to become an amazing Mistress, except some experience. Patricia's intervention is obviously sensible, but those girls are nonetheless lucky to be Emma's guinea pigs. Can't wait to see what happens at the ceremony, also to see Emma and Lexy together again (their threesome with Gabby was amazing!)
Steven
2023-11-09 22:59:48 +0000 UTC
