My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 19, Page 3
Added 2022-10-17 04:01:01 +0000 UTC
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Thanks for your comment :) Emma's sentence in the first line is connected to Gabby's last sentence on the previous page. Gabby says: "Umm… nothing, mistress." and Emma replies: "Gabby, don't say 'nothing' when I can clearly see that there is something on. What's the problem?" Would it look better if I put both sentences on the same page?
SimVenus Arts
2022-10-17 16:43:43 +0000 UTCDag nab it, another epic length note that could of been a lot shorter.
Robmur
2022-10-17 11:05:12 +0000 UTCPlease excuse me, but if I may. The first line where Emma speaks may read better as, "gabby, your not saying anything it something is clearly on your mind. Tell me what it is" I believe that will read better. Story and artwork is going very well. Don't like having to wait 24 hours for the next page. But better than waiting till next month to read the entire chapter. Thank you for sharing your art and story telling tallent.
Robmur
2022-10-17 11:04:00 +0000 UTC
