My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 15, Page 14
Added 2022-07-31 16:00:08 +0000 UTC
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Thanks for spotting the error! I have corrected it :)
SimVenus Arts
2022-07-31 21:08:37 +0000 UTCAarrrrrrrggggghhhh!!!!! This just jumps out at me with flags waving and sirens whailing. Last line is physically impractical, you can't push anything that is of limp base material. As in this case a leash. Pull, pulling, pulled is what can be done with a leash. (Deep breath and relax) ok, sorry about that. Just had to get it out of my system I'll crawl back under my rock, under the bridge. Good story, and I see that Emma has gotten them in trouble already. Dag nab it that I gots to wait and see what happens next. Would it be possible to post the next 5 or 8 posts now? Um, didn't think so but thank for the double posts. Ok ok I'm going back under my rock. Thanks so much for the story.
Robmur
2022-07-31 17:30:01 +0000 UTC
