All-Star Sissy Closing Forum
Added 2025-03-18 01:52:12 +0000 UTCDid you like the ending of All-Star Sissy? Do you want to see more stories in this universe? I'd love to hear any and all thoughts on my first completed series and thanks to all you for reading!
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It was great! I loved that it was a slow burn that was mostly plot, and that the story was grounded. I liked that you didn't focus on the camp, since the interesting parts to me were about Samantha's relationships she was forming on campus. I especially loved every single time someone stood up for her, and the way you showed her and Greg slowly falling for each other. It felt really wholesome ;~;(which is maybe weird to say about erotica, but it's how I feel right now). The only thing I really wanted more of was the psuedo love-triangle between Samantha, Greg, and Abby, but honestly this was the best erotica I've read in years, so just keep doing what you're doing! Thanks again so much! P.S: My cat helped write my other comment, so I deleted it.
gobgirl
2025-03-19 08:15:15 +0000 UTCit was always my headcannon that all your long form stories were set in the same universe, I think it's partly because they have the same throughline in terms of theme. But also really good would love to have a story based in the sissy camp would be interesting.
Daniel Haycroft
2025-03-18 18:15:24 +0000 UTCI really liked it and it definitely had a strong story throughline! But it also felt like there were so many things that could have been elaborated on. You could have done more detailing the camp itself in flashbacks, dealt more with how she was treated in general at the school, other mental changes that she faced from the camp, and even included Jasmine alot more. Overall it felt like a short, well paced story that left alot of things loose that could have been touched on alot more. Overall a great story and I would love to have more stories from this world, including stories focused on people who got sent back or even their time there or different probationary conditions
Michael Anderson
2025-03-18 03:48:33 +0000 UTC
