16/11/22 Update
Added 2022-11-16 10:29:53 +0000 UTCSo... I must report another shameful retcon. Demesne chapter 250 has been edited to include some new material that I thought was better placed there. It doesn't really change the chapter, but it... well, it makes things in later chapters flow better. Again, I'm very sorry for this.
EDIT: So... I screwed up some chapters and used the wrong word. I went back to edit them, and it should be noticable, but if you feel I used a certain word in a certain way before... that's why. My Shameful Retcon count has increased again...
Comments
Yeah. For some reason, I kept mistakenly using the latter sometimes. It’s a related verb in-story, but not the right word, ya know?
SCM2814
2022-11-17 23:09:12 +0000 UTCThis is getting out of hand, now there are two of them! The only word I can think of that you might have adjusted is "meanings"? I think it used to be "tamings" for deadspeakers?
Justin Case
2022-11-17 19:54:57 +0000 UTCJust the little part about Shana brining up her aunt is an authority and moving the family means she needs to be replaced.
SCM2814
2022-11-17 00:51:27 +0000 UTCWhat was added? I didn't notice it on reread.
Justin Case
2022-11-17 00:49:20 +0000 UTC
