Descriptions for Nov 1 (Beauty)

Very excited for the new release. But how long it will take ?

Great points! Thanks for the awesome feedback. I will definitely look into adding a couple more levels of beauty, and revamping the current ones a bit!

magnusmagneto

Hi, The next release will be The Gym, a separate fully playable game. About 90% of the writing and code from The Gym will be implemented into Life Sim. Currently I am releasing descriptions as interim material for patrons to enjoy if they choose to =)

magnusmagneto

Hey there, thanks for the feedback! When I wrote these, I envisioned level 1 to be the starting point. The idea being that she isn't /ugly/, but isn't a knockout. 1 and 2 are meant to be 'average'. (Whether those are 'average' is debatable) Considering the scope of 5.0, I might add more lower levels to grant greater customization.

magnusmagneto

When will the next version release ??

Since RocketNow commented on the high levels, I'll give some feedback on the low levels. It feels like low level beauty starts out higher than say low level muscle--the level 1 muscle girlfriend stuggles to snap a pencil in half, whereas the level 1 beauty has slightly yellowed teeth. Also it's not clear what level is supposed to be "average" beauty. I feel like making it more clear when she surpasses average and starts to get to above average might make her ascension even more striking.

I love the beauty progression, but I feel like some the higher levels could be more descriptive without actually describing her incomprehensible beauty. An easy way to do this is to describe what effects her beauty has vs what her beauty actually looks like. For instance, just looking near 'her make most men feel about to pass out; people often drop to their knees and worship her when she ventures out into public.' I'd be glad to link some of my favorite goddess tier beauty stories, but the actual beauty descriptions themselves are great, but this would be a great way for her beauty to transcend simple textual description. Iorincally, I think a lot of techniques from horror could be applied. An excellent description that you use is how her abs suck in the life around her. Descriptions like that about her beauty would be great!

RocketNowWow